Checkmate

Criticgundam · Post by **Criticgundam** » Fri May 14, 2004 2:30 pm

The story looks good, but I think that you should put that in the 'Blissful Ignorance (Heero x Relena) Fanfiction Showcase'.. Besides that, good story.

Calla Lily · Post by **Calla Lily** » Fri May 14, 2004 3:15 pm

In total confusion, he looked around his apartment and found it in chaos; it looked like she was moving in. He sprinted for the kitchen and looked for a bottle of beer to drown his sorrows. But all he found were tiny shots that were labeled Drink me.

Hmm, let's see if I can help you out here, Raspberry.

From this point, Zechs and Noin have moved in together for reason still unknown to us. To help them, she listed the aid of the girls and their gundam pilots. Looks like they had a little celebration afterwards. (I suppose this was when Quatre disappeared)

Sometime later into the night, it was just the two of them and they decided to play a little game... *grins* I don't think they were sober. I think that she was getting the upperhand and knowing that he will NEVER lose to anyone, Zechs decided to forget the game and play another....

Ahem.

Hence, the outfits they woke up in. I suppose Zechs was the black king due to his black silk boxers and Noin was the white queen due to her tiara and corset... *insert big silly grin*

And there were several Alice in Wonderland references there, like I mentioned before. It's not that crucial to the story if you're not familiar with it, but it just adds more amusement to the game.

I hope that helps.

(all this talking makes me feel like a teacher....)

~Calla.

P.S. Criticgundam, why should I move this to the HYxRP showcase? Did you mean the Believe Your Love forum?

Raspberry · Post by **Raspberry** » Fri May 14, 2004 3:39 pm

Oh... Now I get!

Thank you Calla onee-chan!

Van Schroeder · Post by **Van Schroeder** » Mon May 17, 2004 3:29 pm

Oh, so you've been writing while i was away? What happened to telling me, huh? Just kidding.
Good job, sweetie, made me laugh.

PinkDelusion · Post by **PinkDelusion** » Fri May 28, 2004 10:52 am

hehe...that was so cute! I really liked the 'Alice in Wonderland' allusions -- made it very intersting. Poor poor people. If they would just admit their undying love, then they'd be fine. Great story!

Andrea · Post by **Andrea** » Wed Jun 02, 2004 1:15 pm

Lu, lu... *shakes head* I would NEVER, EVER question your sanity. Okay, this was a bit confusing at first, I won't lie, but after -staring- at a few words for a few minutes, I got it. I know, remember I'm slow. ^__^; BUT, as always, I LOVE your ZM&LN stories, because you portray them so well! *gets giddy*

Was he really wearing silk boxers? Or, maybe I didn't stare long enough at that sentece...

Calla Lily · Post by **Calla Lily** » Thu Jul 01, 2004 11:49 am

Dang it! I WISH I could see Milliardo wearing silk boxers, that would be simply delicious. *coughs* Ahem.

Some good(?) news to this fic. They just may be an extended version of "Checkmate" that carries where we the story left off originally, and also fills in some holes regarding their previous night.

*snicker*

Any chance of ZM/LN surviving this ordeal? Probably not.

Zero Maxwell · Post by **Zero Maxwell** » Sat Jul 03, 2004 6:28 pm

PLease give us the rest it too good.

Calla Lily · Post by **Calla Lily** » Mon Jul 19, 2004 12:01 am

Part one of the extended version can be found in the Believe Your Love forum. Would you please be so kind as to take a look?

And run, don't walk.

~Calla.

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Checkmate

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