Mystery pairing, so it's really open to interpretation, but I had one of the traditional couples in mind. ^_^
<b>The Young Romantic</b>
In among the plastic towers,
As the Barefoot touches soil,
Gather up bouquets of flowers
And fasten them with wire coils.
Catch the heat of shattered glass,
Hold the pinpricks burning bright;
Look upon discarded pasts
In the greyed and silent night.
Cast about for faded souls,
Feast upon the roasted dove;
As the sweetest birdsong lulls
Pledge to me eternal love.
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<i>Thank you very much for reading.
Agape
Psyche</i>
The Young Romantic
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different...but cool 
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"Sometimes I wish I could go back to being five again, where the most difficult decision I had to make was whether I colored the flower red or blue. Back to when my brothers and I would stay out all day playing cops and robbers or cowboys and Indians. Back to when life was easy and carefree. But that would mean a life when I didn’t know you. I don’t think I’d like that too much."
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Beautiful poem! It's haunting and leaves such a striking image in my mind. *applauds*
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oooo!! ur poem's very symbolic.
nicely done! i loved the mental imagery and the darkness to it.
nicely done! i loved the mental imagery and the darkness to it.
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i liked...very mysterious, but interesting and wonderful at the same time ! Great job!
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