Across Enemy Lines Ch. 6 - by Stella, Luvspook, and Rose

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Post by Beck »

Why do I always get a feeling of mourning when I read the ending to each chapter posted with this fic??????!!!!!!!!!

I get so into it that when I get near the end, I want to cry :cry: I'm so loving the 1xR moments and yet Zechs character sure makes the badness come out (course poor Noin tries to make him open his eyes just a bit *kicks Zechs in the shin* :evil: )

Can't help but get a laugh out of Quatre interupting 1xR and Wu's talk with a wounded Heero in the kitchen. All the characters are great!

Well here's to well wishes on the next chapter *_* :bounce:
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Post by aku_ryo »

I will never cease to be amazed by how you guys can com eup with such brilliant stories!!! I absolutely love this story and look forward to mroe anytime you ready!!! I cant thin of ways to compliment you that wil fully express how brilliant I think you guys are!!!

so ill just say

aku akuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu :salute:
Watch out
You might get what your after

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Aah, we've been waiting, so thank you. Amazing, as always. Please, please continue!!!

Love,
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ryanEX2000 wrote:it's alive....
IT'S ALIIIVVVVEEEEE......
*snickers* Indeed. And even a start on chapter 7. *gasp* *faints*

Thanks for reading, Ryan!

Love,
Rose

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Sissi wrote:I can't believe it! Here's the sixth chapter of "Across Enemy Lines"! Wheee!! I'm so happy!
Thanks! I'm shocked so many people even remember it. Much less are glad to read more. :oops:
This chapter was awesome. More twists and mystery, especially concerning this Herr Darlian. Who could it be? Relena? She seemed innocent in this one, but who knows?
You know, sorry if this comes across wrong, since *I* know who it is, it didn't even occur to me that this would be a mystery. Yet, you're not the only person to venture a guess on the topic. Funny how you guys pick up on things we authors don't.
I loved Wufei's role here, he sounded so...I can't describe it.
Hopefully not OOC. As long as OOC isn't the end of that sentence, I'll be very relieved. He's a tough cookie to write, at least for me.

Wufei: Hmph. I wouldn't flatter myself if I were you. I'm difficult on purpose.
Rose: :P
Very good chapter, though. I need more!!i
And we're sincerely hoping to be able to get more done on this in a much much quicker amount of time - now that 1) we have some things sorted out, 2) now that life has seemed to calm down a bit once again. These last...7 months have just been SO crazy. *faints*

*hugs Sissi* Thanks SO much for reading!!!

Love,
Rose

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angelic1090 wrote:O.o It's here! And it's updated~~! *huggles Rose and Stella* I LOVE you guys!! I've been waiting for something to read that was GW-related for AGES and thank you thank you thank you!
*is very relieved* Thank YOU for reading it! *hugs*
This was a lovely chapter, and I like the way Heero is looking at Relena, even IF he is going to leave...
;) I like him being romantic with Relena, too. This is a rarity for me, I think - getting to write them actually IN a relationship. Most of the time, the trouble in my fics is getting them together. But NEVER FEAR! All is not resolved on that front.

Angelic1090: WHAT?
Rose: Errr, I mean... It takes strife to build a solid relationship?
Angelic1090: *glares*
Rose: There will be more kissing!
Angelic1090: Oh, phew. YAY!
Soo hmmm.... post again soon!
We intend to. We're also trying to finish up LLL. Hopefully, ch 12 will be up sometime next week. *glances at Stella* How goes those revisions?
Stella: *glares*
Rose: Right. Anyway....
Morrighan wrote:Ooh...!!! Ooh...!!! I've been waiting for this chapter for a really LONG time!! This chapter was worth the wait!!
*faints* You give us far too much credit. But would you consider being our um...public relations gal? I'll just forward you the death threats, and you can tell them that the next chapter will be 'worth the wait', okay? Because *I'd* feel like a liar saying that.... :oops:
Look forward to more!! The intrigue in this has got me hooked!!
Oh! Yay! We accomplished intrigue! *hugs* I hope we will have more not too far down the line. :)

thanks so much for reading!!!

Love,
Rose

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WhiteWindRRose wrote: well... so I haven't read it yet........ but i'll find the time to soon!!!!
i know i won't be disappointed.... :wink:
ohhh!!! yeah!! ::hops up and down::
this is gonna be a blast!!!
Thanks so much for your enthusiasm! And your patience. I hope you will enjoy it. :)
TigerQueen wrote:Damn...it's nearly 12:30, I have a 9 o'clock tomorrow, & I still have over half of my reading to do...but this was just TOO GOOD!!! Of course, I had to go searching for all the other chapters :-? grr...stupid people, forcing me to stay up late on a school night :wink:
Ack! Sorry! Heero, put down the gun and let the girl do her school work!

Heero: *sulks*
Fantastic! My dad was an officer on a destroyer in the Pacific in WWII (yup, he's 80 years old & my honest-to-God Daddy),
WOW! Hubby's grandfather was in the Navy at the time, and so was my dad's dad. Mom's dad was in Patton's army in Europe.
so I love WWII fics (even though this is a completely different front). If you ever want a first-hand account of the war in the Pacific -- SHAMELESS PLUG -- he wrote a book, & it's in a lot of university libraries -- 200,000 Miles Aboard the Destroyer Cotten -- geisha's & all
Sounds REALLY interesting. I'm going to try to make it to the library that I haven't seen the inside of since college, and I'll look for it when I'm there. What's the author's last name?
Anyway, lovely fic! I especially love the way you've worked in lines & images from the anime -- esp. the difference between protecting the country & protecting HER. Gorgeous! :D
Thanks so much! We really appreciate you reading it. I hope your schoolwork didn't suffer too much. O_o And thanks for the info on the book! :)

Love,
Rose

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Post by blackrose »

wickedchild_md wrote:Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! Or as you might say, Huzzah!

*grins* Yep, I guess I would say that. ;)
Another fantastic chapter Rose and Stella. I don't care how long it takes for you to update (I can live with the torture) just as long as you do update!!!

Another candidate for the public relations dept. ;) Thanks so much!!!
*does the happy dance* I don't think I need to tell you that I just love all those warm moment between Heero and Relena. Oh do keep those coming!!

Oh, definitely. Those are my favorite parts, too.

Stella: Ahem.
Rose: :P Plot schmot. Who needs it. Can we skip to the lemon scene yet?
Stella: *glares and swats Rose* NO!
Rose: *frumps*
And don't you just love Trowa's determination? *sighs happily* I know I do!!

Why should I be surprised by that statement, coming from YOU? :P

Trowa: She just knows what's important.
Rose: Riiiiiiiiiiiight. She just likes imagining you shirtless in a WW2 army uniform.
Trowa: O_O;;
Wicked: *drools*
Darkwing wrote: B-B-B-but...What is this? *Stares at the screen with huge sparkling eyes* ACROSS ENEMY LINES?
:P Yes yes, we know. It's beyond late. :P
Rose, Stella e Luvspook! I LOVE YOU!
You made my day with this!!
This is one of the first fiction I've ever read in my life and I never forgot it!
Oh good. Maybe you can remind us what's happening....

Stella: *smacks Rose*
Rose: I'm KIDDING! :P
Have it some sense if I cover you with the compliments you deserve after saying you let me without words? (Me without words? Nahh! :-P)
Say it isn't so! Darkwing? SPEECHLESS? What IS this world coming to????
Just one plea. Chain your muses to the desk
Can I just chain Stella to the desk? Muses are so much more difficult to catch.....
and...oh...btw, Rose...I still have a certain Noodle. If you promise me to use it on your muse I could even think to give it back! :razz:
Again. Can I just use it on Stella? I think she's more deserving than the muse....
Stella: *glares* I think that a random soldier named J. Rose Black needs to die a horrible horrible death in a Nazi POW camp.
Rose: *scratches head* I don't remember that being in the notes.... *flips pages*
Stella: Late addition.
Rose: -____-;;;
If you are interested...you know how to call me! :wink:
I'm kind rusty on the whole 'summoning darkness' thing. Can you remind me? *secretly plans trap*
GREAT JOB, gals!! *Flyes away*
*glomps* Thanks for reading, guys!

Love,
Rose

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Beck wrote:Why do I always get a feeling of mourning when I read the ending to each chapter posted with this fic??????!!!!!!!!!
Errrrrrr...dunno. Because we're slackers that take forever to update it?
I'm so loving the 1xR moments and yet Zechs character sure makes the badness come out (course poor Noin tries to make him open his eyes just a bit *kicks Zechs in the shin* :evil: )
*joins Beck in kicking Zechs in the shin*
Noin: *kicks Zechs in the shin, too*
*grins*
Can't help but get a laugh out of Quatre interupting 1xR and Wu's talk with a wounded Heero in the kitchen. All the characters are great!
Poor Quatre! ;) And thanks! I'm so glad they seem to be IC. :)
aku_ryo wrote:I will never cease to be amazed by how you guys can com eup with such brilliant stories!!!
Can't take credit. *points to Stella and Luvspook* I just write the Heero x Relena parts and cranky Zechs to Heero or Relena. I rather enjoy that role. Stella's the brilliant one behind the Black Orchestra plotline - which was a real resistance movement in the war. Little known, but we did base it on historical fact.

And of course, this work is originally Luvspook's brainchild. :) *hugs Luvspook*
Naoko wrote:Aah, we've been waiting, so thank you. Amazing, as always. Please, please continue!!!
We're very sorry to have kept you all waiting so long. Thank you for staying with us. We hope to be working on it more regularly, now. :)

*hugs*

Thanks so much!

Love,
Rose

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Post by tornin1/2 »

i seeeeee, i was wondering when and where the next one would be posted. as you can see i've kept myself updated :D .
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