Last Moment (lemon)

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Last Moment (lemon)

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8) :lol: Yes can you beleive it, my second lemon. I'm trying to find my spot because well, action and adventure is my thing with horror and drama and romance. But I've never written a lemon until Eyes Through the Flame. So here's my second lemon. :salute: Hope you enjoy.


Last Moment

The club was spalshed with neon lights, flinging wildly across the club and the bar. Sweaty bodies grinded against each other like having sex. Moans, groans, grunts, and the high beat of Japanese techno mixes flooded his mind.

He was only aware of the bodies around him, dancing. He could hear people laughing and the soft clank of two glasses coming together. Heero noticed that hands brushed against his sweaty body every once in a while.

That's when he looked down to see the girl who he had been hired to protect, than ran away, and he found again.

Her golden honey hair was pulled into a soft bun with strands falling down, tumbing over her chin and sticking to her neck. That black tank top coated her entire chest, revealing the frame of her nipples. The rhimestones made a lazy pattern around her stomach and her tight black hip huggers made the V that was her soft warmth.

Heero grinded himself against her, moving with her like two waves to the music. His right hand grasped her waist and she spun around in mid air and landed on her knees on the dance floor.

Even through his tight fitting pants, he could feel her hot labored breath against him and her nails carressing lazily around his legs before she was pulled up and one of her legs hooked against his.

Relena swung, pressing her warmth against him before pulling away and they danced wildly again.

When songs passed by, Relena and Heero walked over to their lighted table. Relena slumped forward and pressed her sweaty and hot forehead against the cool glass.

"Relena..."

Relena looked up at the sound of her name. "Yes, Heero?" She asked panting.

"Where did you learn to dance like that?" Heero asked her.

She smiled as much as her aching body could. "After two years of being away from the ESUN, I made tons of friends who loved to party just as much as I do. When I saw that these parties were clubs, I picked up the moves pretty quickly."

Something stabbed him. Clubs, she has been into clubs before, where she would dance with other people, other MEN like she had with him? He choked. Jealously swarm over him.

"Heero? What's wrong?" Her voice reached to him and a soft hand landed at his bare forearm.

She probably slept with other men before him, just like he had with other women when he found out she had ran away....from him. Relena repeated his name but Heero didn't answer.

Heero shot up from his seat and anger flashed through him. Relena stood up as well. However Heero brushed her off and ran down the stairs. She chased after him however not being as strong as he was, got into trouble with the people walking up.

"Heero!" She hollered out at him while Heero contuined to ignore her.

Heero finally made it out to the cool streets and he could see the sky was dark. He was downtown and he started to walk back to his dorm.

"Heero!" Her voice was distant and he heard her heels clapping against the wet cement as she tried to reach him.

Suddenly she screamed. Heero snapped and turned around immeditely. Someone was touching her!

A large man, someone whose face Heero could see had captured Relena in his arms and a hand clamped over his mouth as she contuined to struggle.
Heero rushed over and punched the man where he was knocked out instantly.

"Come on." Heero said to Relena softly and grabbing her by her hand, ran to his dorm.

He didn't share his dorm with anybody so they had it all to themseleves. "Thank you, Heero."

"Hn." He said, his body towering over her. Suddenly with no control over himelf, Heero gave Relena a brusing kiss.

Somehow it was because she looked so...delisuous. So...wonderful, leaned against the door with sweat drizzling over her body...

Heero thought Relena was going to slap him however she responded. Kissing him with more force and passion as he was. She moaned when he dipped his tounge down her thoart.

Relena reached and held onto his shoulders. Heero's arm flung around her waist as they tried to walk to his bedroom. However they didn't make it.

THey collasped at the kitchen table and somehow it was strong enough to substain both of their weights.

Heero unlatched his lips from Relena's and panted. A tightening occured to him as he felt Relena's chest go up than down with each labored breath she took. Heero dove in again, kissing her harder and faster.

After that he sucked hard into her neck, sucking and nibbling. Hearing moans caused Heero only to start removing her tank top. Relena panted and moaned. Her legs at both sides of him and her hands skimming his back once she removed the tight T-shirt.

Heero's mouth latched at her bare stomach and Relena groaned. Her back arched, begging for more. Heero's hot wet mouth travelled higher and yanked her bra away. Her breasts piled in and Heero took one of them in his hands and another in his mouth.

Her breasts fitted perfectly along with his mouth and hands and chest as if they were made just for him. His angel...

He sucked and left love bites. "Heero..." Relena gasp, begging for him to move up again. Heero kissed her once more.

Relena's fingers was clumsy as she tried to remove his tight pants. Finally slipping them off, she slipped her hands in Heero's boxers.

Her cold hand reached the waves of his skin, hard yet soft, silky yet rocky.

The cold air hit his butt as he pulled off Relena's hip huggers from her long legs.

She felt the cool wood of his kitchen table run shivers along her long bare legs. "Relena..." Heero whispered hotly into her air before he took the lobe into his mouth. Relena was only vividly aware of him removing her thong and sliding a finger into her.

She arched her back, new to the feeling. "Heero..."

Heero groaned in response. So she was a virgin.

Heero placed both hands at both sides of her body and let Relena take control for one moment. Relena removed his boxers in a fluid moment and looked into his eyes. She reached up and cupped his face and gave him a soft kiss.

"I love you, Heero." She said with closed eyes and a soft smile on her swollen lips.

Heero smiled too when Relena's sea green eyes reopened. "I love you too, Relena." He gave her a soft kiss every since everything had started. They used their tounge, softly in a slow dance.

"I'm ready, Heero." She said softly in his ear. Heero nodded and flung himself into her.

Somehow with Relena's scream, he felt so guilty. She should've been the first for him just like he was for her.

Relena's nails dug into his shoulder and she banged her head against the table, anything to stop the pain. "Relena..."

She gave a trembling weak smile as he crashed over and over into her. Finally nothing but waves of pleasure filled her soul and body. Her world shook around her with pleasure and white as Heero dug dipper.

They kissed any part of the body they could reach and they kissed hungirly and lustfully. Finally their climax reached.

"Relena..." Heero gasped, "I love you."

"And I love you too, Heero. Forever." Relena said softly. They laid there softly on the table.

Well for a while anyhow....

The legs gave out and Relena curled her body tighter around Heero's and with a gasp, they found themseleves lower and than...



CRASH!

Wolf calls....and her cheeks were on fire.

The End.. :-P

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HAHAHA...my first humor thing in all of my fanfics. :eek: :D :lol: :bounce:

i hoped u all liked. *_* and review! :o

u hav 2 promise to review guys!!! lots of them! :oops: :lol: or else....no more lemons for Deathroseaiko. :o :lol: peace.
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Post by Lady Casper »

I like this one even better than the first. 8) At the end it was hilarious :lol:
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Post by Raspberry »

Oh. c'mon Death Rose! This lemon was great! How could you not write more of them since you're so talented?.. Great job, Rose :wink: :lol:
How crazy
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How crazy
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Post by deathroseaiko »

:( i wish i could write more but it's...so complicated. i mean i'm very good at writing drama and everything but LEMONS r a bit....not me. i mean i'm talented in many things and even lemons, i admit to that, however me writing a lemon is a bit...

it really doesnt make me happy often. sometimes it does. but thats rare. i'm tryin to find something in writing that will make me happy. and i suppose i can write a lemon, sometimes, on and off but u knw, i still hav to figure things out first. 8) :roll: :wink:

but dunt worry, i'll b writin a lemon soon. or i hope.
"There's two sides of me. One side that's hidden and one side you always see but can never figure out."

"Short moments of happiness only means that it was true happiness."

"When you look into the mirror, you never see the reflection you want to see."






---Rei

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Post by Raspberry »

Death Rose! We're not forcing you to anything you don't want to! If you don't like writin' lemons - that's ok :D But you ARE talented in writing stuff like this one :wink:
How crazy
Stop talking about me as if you know me
How crazy
I?ve been running away from the ship
sinking in the depths of the ocean

Song How Crazy by YUI

Just be yourself.

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Post by deathroseaiko »

LOL. :D

i knw u guys r not forcing me into doin anything. and well i dunt mind writing a lemon. i'm jus hopin to find a betta area in writing where i'm both happy, both talented, and well known for.
"There's two sides of me. One side that's hidden and one side you always see but can never figure out."

"Short moments of happiness only means that it was true happiness."

"When you look into the mirror, you never see the reflection you want to see."






---Rei

my quotes dont steal them!

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Post by HeerosChick1842 »

yay! continue! :salute:
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Post by bookworm »

Nice work! I can imagine the other GW boys, particularly Duo, teasing the couple about their *cough* accident. :lol:
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Post by deathroseaiko »

LOL well i wanted to try sum hint of humor to make sure i'm pretty good with it.
"There's two sides of me. One side that's hidden and one side you always see but can never figure out."

"Short moments of happiness only means that it was true happiness."

"When you look into the mirror, you never see the reflection you want to see."






---Rei

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Can anyone say "Oops!!" ?? :D :D He-he... Great job!
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