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**Authorz note~ Hey this is my ficcy don't steal it k? All of my characterz are from my imagination I am not a theif ::looks innocent:: I swear to drunk officer, I am not god! R&R's welcomed**

Kate was completely entranced, watching the little streams of smoke that arose from her stone incense burner. Today was one of the biggest days of her entire being. If she ever wondered why she was put on this earth, today was the very answer to that unanswered question.

She sighed deeply dreaming of Grant, the boy she would never see again..

Her relationship had been nothing more than a summer fling. They were both on vacation at their condo's in myrtle beach, sc. It was an instant attraction, a bond was formed the moment they layed eyes on one another. He with his razor tipped crimson hair, and sexy body. She with her long slender frame, raven hair, and startingly green eyes.

She could remember it, like it was yesterday. It was raining outside, and hitting the beach was a definite "no" on a day like that. Kate hated being locked inside that small space, with only her siblings to entertain her. Her younger sister Megan had downsyndrome and was a total troublemaker, but a sweetheart at the same time. Her brother John was a "jock", good at pretty much everything he attempted and not bad looking eaither. Not that she rated her brother on any accounts, she merely informed him that he wasn't hideously grotesque.

The rain was dripping in a soft pattern beyond her bay window. How she longed to be outside, free from her cage. Lately mother and father were driving her absolutely crazy, pressuring her about college choices, and the future she was planning with her boyfriend. Another problem.. Zack had been the best thing in her life since she was seven years old. They grew up in love, or so she thought. Lately he, along with everyone else, was making her feel very nervous about her future. She loved Zack, didn't she? Of course she did, she was simply being foolish.. She had shared her first kiss with him, lost her virginity to him, went to prom with him, suffered losses with him. It were these very thoughts that caused her to shutter, even the love of her life was no more than.... an enemy

She looked about her, apparently shocked to see John staring at her, a look of complete consentration on his face.

"You're going to die ya know?", he said simply. Kate gasped, jaw dropped.

"What on earth are you babbling about?"

He shrugged, "I've seen how much pressure you've been putting on yourself, you should really take an easy."

He never ceased to amaze her. "Haha, lighten up you nerd!" And with that she punched him playfully in the shoulder. He doubled backward, pretending to be injured. He'd never know it, but she really cherished these silly moments that passed between them.
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"TWW: What would you like to be when you grow up?


DM: When I grow up? * laughs * When I grow up, I''d like to be a pastry.


TWW: You mean a pastry chef?


DM: No. I mean a pastry. I don't have very high aspirations, really. I''m a meek sort of fellow."

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