Awesome! I don't think that I've read anything quite as entertaining as this for a very long time.
I loved it through and through. Of course anything with Inuyasha and Kagome is usually entertaining, but this was especially so. It's great how you got the rivalry between Kouga and Inuyasha just perfect. You also had beautiful descriptions that just made me want to die.
Yes! Write a second part! You would be doing the world a huge unjustice if you didn't!!
Well, till next time, keep up the great work!
~Eden
"We seem dead set on turning ourselves into little monsters, don't we? Wonder why that is? It's all the rage all of a sudden. And all of us, is sooo busy running around, trying to beat each other to the finish line that no one notices the big sign from God that says : Stop-Messing-with-my-Stuff." Doc Conners - Ultimate Spiderman Volume 3
The dust bunnies and the plot bunnies are conspiering, . . . I think thats why I keep loosing all my socks.
First of all-I've always loved your work. ^^ And I want to thank you again profusely for sending me the rest of the "It Had to be You" fic. I thought I'd die if I never saw the end! lol.
Now for this one-I think it was absolutely fabulous! Kagome in this acts just like I want her to, it made my heart warm. And Inuyasha is perfectly in character. Kudos to the whole thing! Write another chaper!
My mother wishes to add her two cents: "Personally I loved the fic, go ahead and write a second chapter.That way at least they've been introduced and they can mutually let out all the stops a little bit.
I don't know about Kagome beating him up or anything. After all, he sure as hell isn't allowed to beat her up. And in a sexual relationship ought to keep that in mind."(this is where she an' I disagree, kind of. lol)
When the dream fades
And reality is all that's left
A good story-book
Can bring it right back again.
I am seriously thinking of writing more to this fic, sort of a collection of lemon one-shots that follow the same time line. A more in depth and kinky I/K lemon is quite possible... don't worry whatever Kagome does Inu-kun he will definitely enjoy it.
I'm aslo thinking of throwing in a S/M lemon or two. There is simply so much posibilty with them. It can't be helped. So keep your eyes open and eventually I'll get around to writing more.
Lastly, I owe a huge thanks to everyone who took the time to review. I'm glad you guys enjoyed this.
Do not measure life by the number of breaths you take but rather by the moments that take your breath away.
Some things belong on paper, others in life. It's a blessed fool who can't tell the difference. - Madeleine "Quills"
A masterpiece! And a hot lemon, too. Those two are so crazy and absolutely perfect for one another. And just perfect for a Inuyasha/Kagome fanatic like myself.
God I am so embarassed it took me this long to read this fic *smiles sheepishly*. All I can say is wow!!!, I have to admit you definitly have a talent for writing great lemons that, though, driven by the obvious *winks* have some good hearty plot, I LOVE IT!!!! keep it comin, I am going back to read the other new stories you have posted so I am sure you will hear from me again soon. Til then take care sweetie
You also had beautiful descriptions that just made me want to die.
