[Fic] Final Mission Status by Mizaya and Zapenstap (2/?)
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DragonQueen
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Tomorrow
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You two are on a definite roll with this one. The writing is so beautiful, and the plot completely ingenious. I love Relena's reactions to the changes and her personal struggles with the "mission." They were depicted very well, with genuine feeling.
If you want my opinion (and nobody probably does), Heero isn't acting... he has a inculpable situation in which to let his true feelings for Relena show. He can love her, and there's no attached penalty to it--because everyone think it's him just "acting."
He's so sneaky.
Wonderful, WONDERFUL job you two. Keep those chapters coming.
If you want my opinion (and nobody probably does), Heero isn't acting... he has a inculpable situation in which to let his true feelings for Relena show. He can love her, and there's no attached penalty to it--because everyone think it's him just "acting."
He's so sneaky.
Wonderful, WONDERFUL job you two. Keep those chapters coming.
The Importance of Tomorrow:
The clarity of the hindsight we obtain from a new day may be 20/20, but it provides us with biased knowledge of the experiences and emotions that were-- Not what could have been, if only we had the chance to look through those premonitory eyes.
The clarity of the hindsight we obtain from a new day may be 20/20, but it provides us with biased knowledge of the experiences and emotions that were-- Not what could have been, if only we had the chance to look through those premonitory eyes.
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Elyn Yuy
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I think I fell off the cliff hanger... 
I'm back in my room...*pouts*
Write more!!!
This is getting good!
Elyn Yuy
I'm back in my room...*pouts*
Write more!!!
This is getting good!
Elyn YuyNever get behind a horse. One way or another they will say hello. ~Me
I believe in myth and legend, not the reality of war.
Anomynous: Anybody got a carrot? A cookie? Gingersnap?! ...I''m in trouble.
Horse: Feed me now, and I will not shit in your window.
Elyn Yuy
I believe in myth and legend, not the reality of war.
Anomynous: Anybody got a carrot? A cookie? Gingersnap?! ...I''m in trouble.
Horse: Feed me now, and I will not shit in your window.
Elyn Yuy-
Perfect Soldier
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Sweet Jesus, I printed this out so I could read since I didn't have time to and was running late and it was like 8-9 pages long. I have a new and deeper respect for how much you actually write and how well you write everything. It's just amazing.
Zero
Zero
I'm not afraid of tomorrow,
i'm only scared of myself,
feels like my insides are on fire
and i'm looking through
the eyes of someone else
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zapenstap
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Lol! Thank you very much ^_^ Since Mizaya and I are working together, it doesn't take quite so long to do as when I write by myself, but yes, it does take a long time. my part was from like... 7pm or so until about 3 or 4 am on Monday? Mizaya? do you remember? Heh heh. My last chapter for my Evermore fic was 20 pages And now I'm falling behind on Desires of the Heart. :-? It never stops! Lol. But that's why I like reviews. ^_^ Thank you for writing one! Everybody, thank you very much! I squeal with happiness!
And now I'm falling behind on Desires of the Heart. :-? It never stops! Lol. But that's why I like reviews. ^_^ Thank you for writing one! Everybody, thank you very much! I squeal with happiness!-
melrose_stormhaven
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Heero's not a good actor...at least, not for me!
GO MAN!
RAVISH THE GIRL OUT OF HER MIND!!!
GO MAN!
RAVISH THE GIRL OUT OF HER MIND!!!
VP of the BI Hentai Club
Ennis Tremellyn, Director of CIA in The Man.
?We are only human, and the gods have fashioned us for love. That is our great glory, and our great tragedy.? ? Maester Aemon of The Night's Watch, A Song of Ice and Fire
"There are easier ways to die; this is NOT one of them!"
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Avatar is from the Naruto Shippuden trailer, made by farlist in LJ.
Ennis Tremellyn, Director of CIA in The Man.
?We are only human, and the gods have fashioned us for love. That is our great glory, and our great tragedy.? ? Maester Aemon of The Night's Watch, A Song of Ice and Fire
"There are easier ways to die; this is NOT one of them!"
For ALL your anime/game sountrack needs: http://gh.ffshrine.org?r=23263
Avatar is from the Naruto Shippuden trailer, made by farlist in LJ.
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Darkwing
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ROFL! The hawk! That's an hilarious touch! But the whole restyling was priceless!
Nice contrast with the hidden romance of the 1xR moments!
I truly can't wait to read more, girls! You both are making a very good work! ^___^
Nice contrast with the hidden romance of the 1xR moments!
I truly can't wait to read more, girls! You both are making a very good work! ^___^
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