My VashXMeryl Fic

[vashesGirl]

FOREVER
(YOU KNOW THE DRILL I DONT OWN TRIGUN AND AM MAKEING NO MONEY FROM THIS STORY SO PLEASE DONT SEW T_T)
KIDS....THERE ARE LIKE 4 CUS WORDS NOTHING SERIOUSE SO I SHOULD BE SAFE

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MERYL LAY THERE....NO SIGHN OF LIFE BUT HER BARLY BEATING HEART.
"MR.VASH?" MILLY ENTERS. I TURN MY HEAD SO SHE DOSN'T SEE MY TEAR STANED FACE. LOOKING WORRIED MILLY SAYS "WELL IF YOU WANT DINNER ITS IN THE FRIG HELP YOUR SELF" AND SHE LEAVES THE ROOM.
I LOOK AT MERYL AGAIN BRUSES ON HER FACE AND ARMS BULLET HOLES IN HER LOWER LEG RIGHT ARM LOWER STOMACH AND 2 IN HER UPPER LEFT CHEST. I HAD DONE THE BEST I COULD TO BANDAGE HER WONDS AND MAKE SURE SHE WAS COMFORTABLE BUT I FELT LIKE I WAS DOING NOTHING SHE WAS SLOWLY GETTING WORSE AND I DINT KNOW IF SHE WOULD EVER MAKE IT THROUGH THE NIGHT....SHE HADN'T WOKEN IN 3 DAYS AND I WAS VERY WORRIED.I LOOKED OUT THE OPEN WINDOW INTO THE NIGHT SKY..................................................................................................................

*FLASH BACK*
VASH HAD JUST RETURNED TO TOWN FROM FIGHTING KNIVES AND HEARD GUN SHOTS AND A WOMAN SCREAM. HE RAN TO WHERE THE SCREAMS CAME FROM AND FOND MERYL ON THE FLOOR WITH A GUN POINTED AT HER.
BAD GUY1-"SO LITTLE MISS DID WE PERSWADE YOU TO TELLEN US WHERE VASH IS?"

BAD GUY2-"JUST TELL US AND WE WONT HURT YOU"

MERYL-"BASTARDS I SAID I DON'T KNOW AND IF I DID I WOULDN'T TELL YOU!"

OUT OF THE CORNER OF HER EYE SHE SAW ME GETTEN READY TO WALK IN THE SWINNING DOOR.THE BAD GUYS WHERE TALKING ABOUT WHAT TO DO NEXT. SHE COUGHT MY EYE AND SHOOK HER HEAD TELLING HIM TO STAY WHERE I WAS. I WAS CONFUSED BUT DID AS MERYL SAID.

BAD GUY1-"NOW WHERE WILLING TO CUT YOU IN FOR A SHARE OF THE MONEY IF YOU TELL US WHERE VASH IS".

MERYL-" I TOLD YOU I DONT KNOW"

BADGUY2 SHHOTS AND HIT HER IN THE LOWER LEG. MERYL SCREAMS BUT DOSN'T MOVE. STILL NOT ALLOWING ME TO ENTER.

BADGUY1-TELL US NOW BITCH"

MERYL-"MAKE ME"

BADGUY2 SHOOTS HER TWICE IN THE CHEST AND ONCE IN THE STOMACH THE ONE IN HER CHEST JUST BARLY MISSING HER HEART. I COULDN'T JUST STAND AROUND ANYMORE I JUMPED IN AND SHOT THEM DOWN, TURNING AROUND AND SEEING MERYL FALL THE THE GROUND AND CLOSE HER EYES
*END FLASH BACK*


I PUNKED THE WALL OUT OF FRUSTRATION MABY IF I HADN'T WAITED IF I HAD DISOBAYED MERYL IT WOULD HAVE BEEN DIFFERENT.I WAS CRYING AGAIN SOBBING WITH MY FACE IN MY HANDS.

SUDDENLY I FELT WARM HANDS GRASP MINE GENTLY.....
I LOOKED UP" ......MER.....YL???????!!!!!"

I LOOKED UP AND SAW MERYL AWAKE FOR THE FIRT TIME IN ALMOST 4 DAYS.SHE HAD SEEN ME CRYING AND WAS TRYING TO COMFORT ME BUT COULD IN HER CONDITION.

"MERYL!!!!!!"
I HUGED HER GENTLY AS NOT TO HURT HER.

"I CAN BELIVE YOU FINAALY AWAKE I WAS GETTING WORRIED"

"HOW LONG HAVE I BEEN ASLEEP" SHE ASKED

"THREE IN A HALF DAY"
I LOOKED AT HER AND SIGHED WITH RELIFE.

"IAM SORRY VASH" SHE WHISPERED

IWAS CONFUSED WHY WAS SHE SORRY WHAT DID SHE DO TO BE SORRY ABOUT? SHE INTERUPTED MY THOUGHTS

"IAM SORRY I MADE YOU CRY"SHE SAID IN A LOW VOICE

I GRABED HER HAND LOOKED IN TO HER EYES AND SAID

"MERYL I WAS JUST WORRIED THATS ALL.

#######################################################################
(NOW MERYL IS I AND VASH IS VASH OR HIM GOT IT? NO? OH WELL)

I KNEW I MAD HIM CRY I DIDN'T MEAN TO.
VASH WAS LOOKING ME RIGHT IN THE EYE AND I COULD SEE ALL THE SUFFERING HE HAD TO GO THROUGH IIN HIS LIFE. HE HAD SUCH GENALE EYES YET THEY WHERE FILLED WITH SO MUCH PAIN.
I LOVED HIM. I KNOW I DO. BUT ....IAM AFRAID....AFRAID HE WOULDN'T LOVE ME BACK....OR HE WOULD LEAVE.
FOR A WHILE WE JUST SAT THERE LOOKING AT EACH OTHER I WANTED TO TELL HIM BUT I JUST COUDN'T IF ONLY I WAS STRONGER IF ONLY.
I COULD TELL VASHES MIND WAS RACING TOO ABOUT WHAT?I DIDN'T KNOW.I TOOK A DEEP BREATH SNAPPING ME AND VASH BACK INTO REEALITY. A TEAR RAN DOWN HIS CHEECK.

"VASH......."

"OH, YEAH MERYL."
I TOOK ONE MORE DEEP BREATH AND KISSED HIM.

I LOOKED INTO HIS EYES HE LOOKED SUPRIZED BUT HAPPY.
SUDDENLY I DIDN'T FEEL SO GOOD.
AND I LOOKED DOWN AT MY LEG IT WAS BLEEDING THE STICKES HAD COME OUT AND I WAS LOSSING BLOOD FAST.I GASPED AND VASH LOOKED WHERE I WAS LOOKING MY SHEET SWHERE COVERED IN BLLOD AND I BLACKED OUT.
#######################################################################
(NOW VASH IS I AND MERYL IS MERYL OR SHE GET IT? NO? OH WELL)

I THREW MERYLS BLANKET OF HER AND LOOKED AT HER LEG SHE WAS LOSSING BLOOD AT A RAPID RAITE. BUT I COULDN'T MAKE THE BLEEDING STOP NO MATER WHAT I DID. MERYLS BREETHING SLOWED DOWN AND HER HEART RATE DROPED.

"NO I YELLED YOU CANT DIE MERYL"
"MERYL PLEASE WAKE UP MERYL"
"MERYL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"





WHAT AN INTERESTING PLACE TO LEAVE OFF..I HAVENT EVEN STARTED ON FOREVER2 YET BUT I WILL VERY SOON PROMISE!
THATS IT FOR NOW DID YAH LIKE IT EVER A LITTLE? WELL WHO ASKED YOU? OH I DID WELL NEVER MIND BE ON THE LOOK OUT FOR FOREVER2
SO YAH HAVE COMMENTS?? DROP ME A LINE AT
ALLYCAT13121@HOTMAIL.COM
ENJOY

FOREVER
(YOU KNOW THE DRILL I DONT OWN TRIGUN AND AM MAKEING NO MONEY FROM THIS STORY SO PLEASE DONT SEW T_T)
KIDS....THERE ARE LIKE 4 CUS WORDS NOTHING SERIOUSE SO I SHOULD BE SAFE

***********************************************************************
MERYL LAY THERE....NO SIGHN OF LIFE BUT HER BARLY BEATING HEART.
"MR.VASH?" MILLY ENTERS. I TURN MY HEAD SO SHE DOSN'T SEE MY TEAR STANED FACE. LOOKING WORRIED MILLY SAYS "WELL IF YOU WANT DINNER ITS IN THE FRIG HELP YOUR SELF" AND SHE LEAVES THE ROOM.
I LOOK AT MERYL AGAIN BRUSES ON HER FACE AND ARMS BULLET HOLES IN HER LOWER LEG RIGHT ARM LOWER STOMACH AND 2 IN HER UPPER LEFT CHEST. I HAD DONE THE BEST I COULD TO BANDAGE HER WONDS AND MAKE SURE SHE WAS COMFORTABLE BUT I FELT LIKE I WAS DOING NOTHING SHE WAS SLOWLY GETTING WORSE AND I DINT KNOW IF SHE WOULD EVER MAKE IT THROUGH THE NIGHT....SHE HADN'T WOKEN IN 3 DAYS AND I WAS VERY WORRIED.I LOOKED OUT THE OPEN WINDOW INTO THE NIGHT SKY..................................................................................................................

*FLASH BACK*
VASH HAD JUST RETURNED TO TOWN FROM FIGHTING KNIVES AND HEARD GUN SHOTS AND A WOMAN SCREAM. HE RAN TO WHERE THE SCREAMS CAME FROM AND FOND MERYL ON THE FLOOR WITH A GUN POINTED AT HER.
BAD GUY1-"SO LITTLE MISS DID WE PERSWADE YOU TO TELLEN US WHERE VASH IS?"

BAD GUY2-"JUST TELL US AND WE WONT HURT YOU"

MERYL-"BASTARDS I SAID I DON'T KNOW AND IF I DID I WOULDN'T TELL YOU!"

OUT OF THE CORNER OF HER EYE SHE SAW ME GETTEN READY TO WALK IN THE SWINNING DOOR.THE BAD GUYS WHERE TALKING ABOUT WHAT TO DO NEXT. SHE COUGHT MY EYE AND SHOOK HER HEAD TELLING HIM TO STAY WHERE I WAS. I WAS CONFUSED BUT DID AS MERYL SAID.

BAD GUY1-"NOW WHERE WILLING TO CUT YOU IN FOR A SHARE OF THE MONEY IF YOU TELL US WHERE VASH IS".

MERYL-" I TOLD YOU I DONT KNOW"

BADGUY2 SHHOTS AND HIT HER IN THE LOWER LEG. MERYL SCREAMS BUT DOSN'T MOVE. STILL NOT ALLOWING ME TO ENTER.

BADGUY1-TELL US NOW BITCH"

MERYL-"MAKE ME"

BADGUY2 SHOOTS HER TWICE IN THE CHEST AND ONCE IN THE STOMACH THE ONE IN HER CHEST JUST BARLY MISSING HER HEART. I COULDN'T JUST STAND AROUND ANYMORE I JUMPED IN AND SHOT THEM DOWN, TURNING AROUND AND SEEING MERYL FALL THE THE GROUND AND CLOSE HER EYES
*END FLASH BACK*


I PUNKED THE WALL OUT OF FRUSTRATION MABY IF I HADN'T WAITED IF I HAD DISOBAYED MERYL IT WOULD HAVE BEEN DIFFERENT.I WAS CRYING AGAIN SOBBING WITH MY FACE IN MY HANDS.

SUDDENLY I FELT WARM HANDS GRASP MINE GENTLY.....
I LOOKED UP" ......MER.....YL???????!!!!!"

I LOOKED UP AND SAW MERYL AWAKE FOR THE FIRT TIME IN ALMOST 4 DAYS.SHE HAD SEEN ME CRYING AND WAS TRYING TO COMFORT ME BUT COULD IN HER CONDITION.

"MERYL!!!!!!"
I HUGED HER GENTLY AS NOT TO HURT HER.

"I CAN BELIVE YOU FINAALY AWAKE I WAS GETTING WORRIED"

"HOW LONG HAVE I BEEN ASLEEP" SHE ASKED

"THREE IN A HALF DAY"
I LOOKED AT HER AND SIGHED WITH RELIFE.

"IAM SORRY VASH" SHE WHISPERED

IWAS CONFUSED WHY WAS SHE SORRY WHAT DID SHE DO TO BE SORRY ABOUT? SHE INTERUPTED MY THOUGHTS

"IAM SORRY I MADE YOU CRY"SHE SAID IN A LOW VOICE

I GRABED HER HAND LOOKED IN TO HER EYES AND SAID

"MERYL I WAS JUST WORRIED THATS ALL.

#######################################################################
(NOW MERYL IS I AND VASH IS VASH OR HIM GOT IT? NO? OH WELL)

I KNEW I MAD HIM CRY I DIDN'T MEAN TO.
VASH WAS LOOKING ME RIGHT IN THE EYE AND I COULD SEE ALL THE SUFFERING HE HAD TO GO THROUGH IIN HIS LIFE. HE HAD SUCH GENALE EYES YET THEY WHERE FILLED WITH SO MUCH PAIN.
I LOVED HIM. I KNOW I DO. BUT ....IAM AFRAID....AFRAID HE WOULDN'T LOVE ME BACK....OR HE WOULD LEAVE.
FOR A WHILE WE JUST SAT THERE LOOKING AT EACH OTHER I WANTED TO TELL HIM BUT I JUST COUDN'T IF ONLY I WAS STRONGER IF ONLY.
I COULD TELL VASHES MIND WAS RACING TOO ABOUT WHAT?I DIDN'T KNOW.I TOOK A DEEP BREATH SNAPPING ME AND VASH BACK INTO REEALITY. A TEAR RAN DOWN HIS CHEECK.

"VASH......."

"OH, YEAH MERYL."
I TOOK ONE MORE DEEP BREATH AND KISSED HIM.

I LOOKED INTO HIS EYES HE LOOKED SUPRIZED BUT HAPPY.
SUDDENLY I DIDN'T FEEL SO GOOD.
AND I LOOKED DOWN AT MY LEG IT WAS BLEEDING THE STICKES HAD COME OUT AND I WAS LOSSING BLOOD FAST.I GASPED AND VASH LOOKED WHERE I WAS LOOKING MY SHEET SWHERE COVERED IN BLLOD AND I BLACKED OUT.
#######################################################################
(NOW VASH IS I AND MERYL IS MERYL OR SHE GET IT? NO? OH WELL)

I THREW MERYLS BLANKET OF HER AND LOOKED AT HER LEG SHE WAS LOSSING BLOOD AT A RAPID RAITE. BUT I COULDN'T MAKE THE BLEEDING STOP NO MATER WHAT I DID. MERYLS BREETHING SLOWED DOWN AND HER HEART RATE DROPED.

"NO I YELLED YOU CANT DIE MERYL"
"MERYL PLEASE WAKE UP MERYL"
"MERYL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"





WHAT AN INTERESTING PLACE TO LEAVE OFF..I HAVENT EVEN STARTED ON FOREVER2 YET BUT I WILL VERY SOON PROMISE!
THATS IT FOR NOW DID YAH LIKE IT EVER A LITTLE? WELL WHO ASKED YOU? OH I DID WELL NEVER MIND BE ON THE LOOK OUT FOR FOREVER2
SO YAH HAVE COMMENTS?? DROP ME A LINE AT
ALLYCAT13121@HOTMAIL.COM
ENJOY

[vashesGirl]

i wrote this ibn like two days so its not that good ::sigh::

[Elyn Yuy]

Understood.

I got it actually, so that's good.

Great job, but it isn't a crossover, is it?

Maybe put it under Trigun. I don' know.

All I know is that it;s pretty good!




Elyn Yuy

[Kanya Barton]

This was good, I was able to follow what was going on just fine; however, the fact that you typed it all in CAPS was really annoying to me. Maybe it's just the proper reading person in me...but if you can try...can you try not to do that again?? PUWEASE!?
Peace out!

[sailorDH]

yea, i agree with kanya, the caps made a a bit hard to read.
otherwise, the idea's good.

[WaterGoddessX]

the idea of your story was very good, and i like it alot.......hope u write more or another one soon