Across Enemy Lines ch 7 by Stella and the Black Rose

zipdos · Post by **zipdos** » Mon Dec 15, 2003 9:29 am

Hey Hey!!! A new chappie!!!! *bounces around*

I don't care if it takes forever to finish and to upload...At least you guys are doing it right? The cliffhanger I could of past but that's how it goes doesn't it!!! I really liked the fluff part with Heero and Relena *sigh*

Can't wait for the next chappie!!!!

pilot03 · Post by **pilot03** » Mon Dec 15, 2003 9:58 am

*faints*.....I couldn't believe there was an update....I read...was filled with happiness...and then you end with the cliff hanger!!! You will be the death of me.... :-? Great chapter and even better story.

Kari · Post by **Kari** » Mon Dec 15, 2003 3:50 pm

Cliffhangers who invented those?????
:evil: Let me guess Cliff Hanger

wicked · Post by **wicked** » Tue Dec 16, 2003 5:12 am

*glares* No shirtless Trowa!!! *sigh* It was nothing more than a dream. *cries*

Other than that: SPIFFILICIOUS!!!!! I don't know how I missed this update. *hits head* Oh wait, maybe I shouldn't do that. It might be the reason I missed the update in the first place.

I think the main reason everyone is upset at the cliffhanger is due to the long intervals between updates. Me? I understand the cliffhanger. And I applaud you and Stella on this masterpiece! So much drama and slight bits of humour, just the all around beauty of this story, and the angst. Oh yes you do have angst in this one don't you ladies? However, it's not overly done, therefore it must be marveled at.

Continuity. How do you ladies do it? I'm jealous.

And just so you know I was rooting for the 1xR juggernaut when they kissed. I thought, "About damn time Yuy! Grab her and kiss her senseless! It has to happen at least once a chapter. And if no kiss then at least a wonderfully sappy moment.... Wha...? And you IDIOT! Just say you love her! You know you do! IDIOT!!!!!" Then I calmed down, sobered up and continue to read.

Hugs, kisses, and appropriate worship is given you, Stella and Rose.

~Wicked

Shinigamigrul · Post by **Shinigamigrul** » Wed Dec 17, 2003 8:17 pm

*GLOMP* YAYYYYYYYYYYYY FINALLLLLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY...NOOOOOOOOOOOO...CLIFFFFFFFFHANGERRRR....then again i have forgotten most of the story so i shall re-read the whole thing....u is evil rose!!! :evil:

Darkwing · Post by **Darkwing** » Thu Dec 18, 2003 7:13 am

Wonderful chapter! It was really worhty the long wait.
Very very good! Zechs is so much in character! And the Heero and Relena moment was precious. All the Darlian thing is growing interesting. My compliments to you both, gals! *Thumb up*. I will follow your next post.

Kaili Charmer · Post by **Kaili Charmer** » Thu Dec 18, 2003 4:43 pm

OMG, it's been 8 months...and you leave me a prolonged cliffhangar??? AAAAAAAAAARRRRGGGG! My gosh, the scene was sweet and you just HAD to prolong the "I choose" for several lines...and then left without an answer? Geez, i hope there's an answer within the next few weeks...."weeks" not "months"

That was cruel, leaving us like that.

But I am glad you got this chapter out finally. Praise to you for your outstanding work, yet again! I mean, i wouldn't be so mad about the posting dates if it weren't soooo good! :razz:

Tsukiyo · Post by **Tsukiyo** » Sat Jan 10, 2004 7:42 pm

ARE YOU KIDDING ME!?!?!?!??!?!

ooo, this is evil. so evil it transcends words.

not to say i'm not grateful for another chapter

BUT

that does not forgive treachery such as this!

tsukiyo

Sovereign of Silence · Wed Jan 14, 2004 8:26 pm

damn i hate cliffhangers it keeps me ... uh.. hanging ? :razz: i love this story

AWESOME! i wonder if releena choice is hmm.. ouch brain think too hard can wait for next chapter !! YAY!!

melrose_stormhaven · Post by **melrose_stormhaven** » Thu Jan 22, 2004 10:57 pm

How could you! You left it hanging...WAHHHH!!!

*sniff*

Oh well, must as well wait!

Blissful Ignorance

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