Forlorn (Drabble #12)

SimplyTurquoise · Post by **SimplyTurquoise** » Wed Dec 10, 2003 10:54 pm

Disclaimer: I do not own the GW character, I can only lay claim to the the organization of these words.

Title: Forlorn
Word Count: 105
Rating: G
Pairings: 1xR

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Cold and forgotten--- I lay empty. A shadow of memory of the warmth that once occupied my entire being.

Did she no longer care for me? Or had I appeared shabbier with age--- already the years wearing me thin from the day you first found me.

I do not know--- I could not, for I watch as your hands are wrapped within another?s, his hands warming your soft skin. Maybe I was not meant to comprehend--- for I was made with one simple purpose.

And yet--- I lay empty, envying what I had lost. Awaiting the day when you would remember me, your ever-faithful gloves.

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Authors Note: Who ever said inanimate objects didn't have feelings was wrong! I know for a fact that my computer has the mind of a mischievious demon who likes to misbehave whenever possible. Anyways, I hope you enjoyed my little drabble and please do review!

Morrighan · Post by **Morrighan** » Thu Dec 11, 2003 12:02 am

Ooh... I get it... He-he-he... I loved the effect!!

Great job, ST!!

freelight01 · Post by **freelight01** » Thu Dec 11, 2003 1:09 am

That was great. I loved it, but i gotta admit that i did think it was Relena's Teddy bear at first - my bad.

keep writing

Akasha · Post by **Akasha** » Thu Dec 11, 2003 1:32 am

That's so cute.

bookworm · Post by **bookworm** » Thu Dec 11, 2003 2:50 pm

Interesting. Such a surprising subject 2.

paxbanana · Post by **paxbanana** » Thu Dec 11, 2003 3:20 pm

HAHA!

I was getting ready to feel so depressed, and then the gloves pop in! Excellent idea!

miaka mouse · Post by **miaka mouse** » Fri Dec 12, 2003 6:41 am

niiice!! very cool pov piece... i luv the hint that heero's hands r the ones keeping hers warm now.. lovely

Eienvine · Post by **Eienvine** » Sat Dec 13, 2003 3:12 am

That was friggin' hilarious! You totally had me going there for a while- when the gloves line popped in, I had to reread it to reassure myself that was really what it said. Hilarious! Great drabble!

Blissful Ignorance

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