Conception (drabble #12)

miaka mouse · Post by **miaka mouse** » Wed Dec 10, 2003 2:10 am

u think i'd let this challenge go without taking it up myself? oh btw... ideas for the next challenges are welcome! PM me or email me at miakamouse@yahoo.com... seriously..i'll take anything u got... i've only got a couple good topics left... anyway.. onto more important things...

Conception

Heero-centric
PG
Word count: 100

He?d always assumed his physical attributes were suited for only one thing; that his biology had dictated his destiny. His long fingers and wide palms were ideal for handling any weapon, from a gun to a Gundam, while his lean frame and long limbs optimized his maneuverability in both combat and evasive action.

So when he saw those hands categorized as artistic, his physique ?athletic? on another, he felt suddenly unfulfilled. And as he watched his son grow to use those traits in ways he?d never imagined for himself, Heero realized how fine the line was between pride and envy.

paxbanana · Post by **paxbanana** » Wed Dec 10, 2003 3:10 pm

That certainly is an odd twist. Think of little Heeros playing basketball and sculpting... ^.-

Me gusta mucho!

illiterate · Post by **illiterate** » Wed Dec 10, 2003 3:15 pm

Poor Heero, he missed out on all the good stuff

by the way, that was great

Andrea · Post by **Andrea** » Wed Dec 10, 2003 4:46 pm

I liked it. Like Paxbanana said, that was one strange twist. But I liked it.

Morrighan · Post by **Morrighan** » Wed Dec 10, 2003 6:37 pm

Ooh... It was a very good twist.... Great job, miaka!

bookworm · Post by **bookworm** » Wed Dec 10, 2003 7:14 pm

I agree w/ them. The twist was unexpected, and I felt sorry for Heero that he didn't thought of the fact that his physique could be viewed differently. Definitely interesting.

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