She Has It All (Drabble #12)

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She Has It All (Drabble #12)

Post by silversong »

She Has It All

Words: 102
Pairing: None, it's introspective
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I don't own GW, and make no profit from my writing.


She has it all. Always has. In many ways, our circumstances have been very much alike. Both military. Both in love with our superiors.

But her grades were always better. And he loves her. I know he does. He lived! My love, my Treize, gave his life for humanity. For me also, I know, but it doesn't help with the pain.

We fought during the war. Like cats and dogs. Over orders, over grace. We don't fight now. I envy her happiness, but it's not worth it, I tell myself.

Curse you, Lucrecia Noin. Curse your happiness that I will never have.

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Post by melodrama »

Ooooh... very nice Silver!

I think you did a great job there of capturing Une's thoughts and feelings with such a small number of words.

It really makes me feel for her. *thinks about hugging Colonel Une and decides against it* I have to admit that I've often pondered over how Une would continue on without him. Such a bittersweet pairing.

Well Done!!

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Post by miaka mouse »

gah! regrets..the worst thing ever! nice writing! i really felt the bitterness of losing something u could have had... ::sigh:: poor une!
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Post by Wingnut »

melodrama wrote: It really makes me feel for her. *thinks about hugging Colonel Une and decides against it*
Only Beck can get away with that due to the 3x11 avatar.
And Yes, Ever since she got shot by Tuberov Lady Une has been one of my favorite characters in all of Gundam, not just Wing.
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Post by sailorDH »

that was soo sad!

soo bitter...
that was a great introspection.

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