Ok here is pt. 3 enjoy!!!!
"Leave her be? a voice ran out from behind a few trees. The voice itself scared Kagome and made her jump. Sesshomaru growled low in his throat. Which also surprised Kagome, she never heard him growl like that before, then again she didn?t know him all that well. She only knew him as an evil, mean, and ruthless killer but, why??.why did had he been so close and why did he seem different a minute ago. Why? And why was he acting all strange after her two brothers left. ?Wait! Why did they leave anyway and where did they go??
By this time Sesshomaru had pulled away from her but, didn?t release her wrists, he only applied more pressure to them. ?What are you doing in my lands Rare?? Sesshomaru?s cold voice had returned. ?I was passing through when my two sons told me that my daughter needed my help and who am I not to help my youngest child and the heir to my lands?? He said as he walked out of the cover of the trees.
He didn?t look to much more different from Kagome. Except instead of his ?fur? being dark blue like his children it was dark green and his eyes were light blue with a bit of silver in them, and he had white crescent moon on his forehead along with white stripes on his arms and face. Sesshomaru growled again but this time in a quick motion turned completely around but instead of letting go of Kagome?s wrists he twisted one of her arms behind her back and wrapped one of his arms around her neck. She gasped; she didn?t expect him to do that.
Rare kept on walking slowly towards them, ?Stop if you want to see her alive again!? ?That?s kind of harsh don?t you think?? ?actually I don?t really care if she lives or dies cause either way you or her can?t stop me from taking over your lands!? he said with a small smirk on his face and applied more pressure to her neck to prove his point. Kagome gasped as the pressure increased around her neck. Rare growled low in his throat, not because Sesshomaru wanted his lands, because he was threatening his family. He looked over at Kagome who was now breathing awfully hard and looked like she was going to pass out. This really worried Rare he had never seen her like this before. It was as if she were internally injured or something similar to that effect. Rare had to get her out of Sesshomaru?s grasp, but how? How was he going to get her away? Rare inspected the way Sesshomaru held Kagome and noticed that he was trying his hardest to keep from hurting her to badly. That could mean that he didn?t want to hurt her and therefore was trying to protect her, but why would he want to protect her?
Sesshomaru looked down at Kagome and noticed that her breath had suddenly increased and she would soon pass out from how tired she was and the way he was holding her wasn?t helping at all. Her breathes were now staggering and was losing conscious fast. But, to all of their surprise Sesshomaru let her arm go and let his arm fall from her neck. She began to fall over but, Sesshomaru caught her placing one hand under her neck and the other under her knees. He held her close to his chest and as she lost consciousness she could hear the rhythm of his heart beating in his chest.
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Sango sat next to Miroku by the fire. She was cursing Inuyasha under her breath. ?LISTEN SANGO IF YOU GOT SOMETHIN? TO SAY, SAY IT!? He yelled as he stood up. ?WE?LL INUYASHA IT WILL BE TO HARD FOR YOU TO UNDERSTAND IF I TELL IT TO YA STRAIGHT SO I?LL PUT IN WORDS YOU CAN UNDERSTAND. YOU ARE AN INCOMPETENT HALF-BREED THAT IS POWER HUNGRY AND IF YOUWEREN?T SUCH A MORON THEN KAGOME WOULD STILL BE HERE IF ?IT? WASN?T HERE? She yelled at him, pointing at Kikyo. ?WHAT HOW THE HELL CAN YOU SAY THAT, KAGOME RAN OFF ON HER OWN AND? ?AND IT WAS BECAUSE OF YOU THAT SHE RAN AWAY AND WOULDN?T HAVE DONE THAT IF NOT FOR YOU!? She snapped at him before he could finish. And before he could say anymore she stormed off into the woods, Miroku followed a short time after. Inuyasha stared blankly after them. She was right it was his fault that Kagome ran away and if she was injured or dead then he would be at fault. But, he would never admit it to Sango, Miroku or Shippo. Kikyo wrapped her arm around him but, he pushed her away and got up and walked into the woods after the couple that went in there first. He searched for close to an hour before he heard the two of them talking not to far up ahead. He kept walking ignoring the fact that they were talking about him. ?Sango! Miroku! I need to talk to you.? ?What do you want Inuyasha? it was Sango and Inuyasha could tell that she had been crying. ?Look Sango tomorrow if you want we could start looking for Kagome if you want.? There was a brief silence before the two of them emerged from the woods not far from Inuyasha. Sango still had red eyes from where she was crying and Miroku had his arm around her shoulders and was comforting her and not being perverted like usual. This really surprised even Inuyasha. ?Ok Inuyasha in the morning we will start to look for Kagome.
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Kagome awoke 2 days later on a futon in a place she had never seen or been to before. The room itself had to have been 3 time s bigger than hers and the ceiling was so high that she almost couldn?t see it. There was a fire place to the right of her which had been turned on and the flames looked as though they were dancing on the log that had been placed in the middle. She tried to sit up but with no success for she had a throbbing headache and her shoulder hurt pretty badly. She hadn?t noticed that her shoulder had been cut, and thought it had been cut when she was fighting Sesshomaru. Thinking about him she wondered where he was. Suddenly the door to the left of her open and revealed Sesshomaru. ?So you?re finally awake? He stated coldly. She looked at him with a death glare and he just smirked at her. She tried to rise again but was still unsuccessful. Her gaze again moved from the ceiling to Sesshomaru. ?What did you do to me Sesshomaru?? ?Me, I did nothing to you!? ?Then Why can?t I get up? ?Maybe cause you are injured and I only gave you a small amount of a drug to keep you asleep so I don?t have to hear your whining about your injuries.? ?You did what!!!!! What makes you think I would whine about my injuries?? ?Because wench I have hurt you before and I could hear you whining about it from here? ?OH, please I know you couldn?t here me cause you never have hurt me in the past so therefore you couldn?t have heard me. You just wanted to see what the drug would do to me if you gave it to me? He smirked at her response. ?You know wench you are??????..? ?My name is Kagome! How many times do I have to tell you that!? He growled and walked over to her and grabbed the cuff of her shirt and pulled her up to his face. His eyes where turning redder by the second. ?You will hold your tongue ?????? ?Or what?! You?ll kill me? Go ahead and kill me if it will make you feel better, I?m sure that if I was dead it?ll be easier to take control of my dad?s lands. Don?t you think?? He was speechless, he couldn?t think of why she wanted to die. He released her and she fell back landing softly on the futon, with tears swelling up in her eyes. He looked at her a little bit longer before picking her up off the floor and holding her in an embrace. She couldn?t push him away because she couldn?t even hold herself up so she let him hold her. Tears ran down her face and she dug her head into his chest, while all he could do was stare down at her for a while before talking. He didn?t know what to do or say to her, and was afraid to upset her even more. Until finally he noticed that her sobs had decreased slightly and tears fell. His griped tighten and she stood there motionless to his tightening grip. Just before he could say something someone knocked on the big oak door on the right. Sesshomaru sighed and lad Kagome back on the futon. She turned over and dug her head in the pillow. Sesshomaru headed for the door and opened it to a smiling Rin. ?what is it Rin?? ?Sesshomaru-sama Jaken said that your friend from the forest is here.? ?Yes, Rin she is here???? ?Can I play with her Sesshomaru-sama please? With a big smile on her face, which Sesshomaru found very hard to say no to. And he really couldn?t say no to her, for you see that he had grown attached to her and found it hard to turn her away from anything but, the only thing that was good bout it was that when he did she turned away with a smile on her face.
He looked at her and said, ?Rin I?m sorry but, Kagome-chan isn?t feeling very good and needs rest.? ?Ok, Sesshomaru-sama, then I?ll come back when she is feeling better? and she turned to walk away but, a voice rang out surprising both Rin and Sesshomaru. ?Wait!? Sesshomaru turned around to see Kagome stumbling over to the 2 of them. But, she lost her footing and fell over and before she hit the ground he caught her, placing his hands on her waist to hold her up. He helped her over to the door to see Rin. She looked at Rin with a smile and said, ?Hi, Rin how are you doing?? ?UMMMM, I?m doing ok how ?bout you?? she asked tilting her head to the side. ?I?m doing fine just very tired.? ?OH, then I?ll let you go back to sleep and when u isn?t tired anymore will you play with me, PLEASE? She begged. ?Sure Rin, I?ll play with you just as soon as I feel a little better k!?? ?k? was the last thing she said before she ran off down the hall toward her bedroom.
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?I see? he said to his best spy. ?We?ll if he isn?t torturing her or trying to kill her then I think that she would be safer there than here? ?But, sire if she stays there then she?ll be in a bigger danger than the threats she got here.? ?We?ll no one except us know that and if they don?t know she?s there then she?ll be safe? ?and if they find out she?s there?? ?Then we?ll have to hope Sesshomaru will protect her or that she?ll defend herself well enough till we can get there.? He said with a small smile on his face. He knew Kagome could fight and with her miko powers she was unbeatable but, since she hadn?t used them in a long time she may not be able to access the power she needs to win. He sighed and went back to doing his work. He feared for her safety but, her being with Sesshomaru was a miracle for him. He knew that if she were here then the evil Lord Litho would probably try to kidnap her and then use her to gain control of his lands, but then again Sesshomaru probably had the same intentions, but something about the way he was around her made him have some hope that he would protect her. sighed again and looked out of the window into the dark summer night.
His spy left the room and walked down the hall, he turned the corner and headed down another hall. He kept this up until he got outside, he walked past some of the guards and headed for the forest, he got into the forest and, ? Well where is she?? the voice called from behind a bush. ?She is in the care of Sesshomaru of the Western Lands!? ?Really!! Very interesting, maybe I should pay him a little visit?? the voice thought out loud. ?Um???..Lord Litho, I think that She has fallen in Love with Lord Sesshomaru.? ?And why would u think that? He is capable of loving anyone especially a once human!? ?I don?t know Lord he seems very attached to her.? ?We?ll see!!? was the last of what he said and turned away to go back to the East.
so what do u think?
the 4th pt. may take a while but ill put it up soon!!
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It's pretty good so far, it's getting a little sappy with all the moments between Sesshomaru and Kagome...then all the stuff between Inu and Kikyo...and Miroku and Sango...and again I stress the grammar rule I talked of earlier. I feel like a teacher telling you this, but if you were to use that you would attract even more readers because it would be SO much easier to read. Otherwise, keep the chapters coming! Well, I have to go now. Bye bye!
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Make the next part soon! Will Kagome get Sesshomaru?
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"... She stopped. Had it been her heart they failed her, or had her eyes, veiled in the mornfulness that lies over all the wild things on earth, seen the hopelessness of longing that will find out sometimes even a savage soul in the lonely darkness of its being?" Conrad, The Heart of Darkness