Dinner and Dessert 3/4 (Lemon content included)

Mission briefing: KGB threatening code name WHISPERED candidates. Believed target: Kaname Chidori, 16, Tokyo, Japan.
Mission status: Critical<br>
Mission personnel: Sergeant Magjor Melissa Mao; Sgt. Kurz Weber, and Sgt. Sousuke Sagara, Arm-Slave specialist; Mission objective: To protect Kaname Chidori from KGB kidnapping plot, without alerting the Japanese gov't or target as to the identity of super-secret military organization, code-named MITHRIL. <br>
Kaname: Why are you following me?!
Sousuke: It's just coincidence.

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Shinobi
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Post by Shinobi »

What a great story! I look forward to the final chapter.

You did a great job capturing Sousuke's formal demeanor and yet had plenty of emotion behind it as well. Bravo!
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Post by blackrose »

The only thing I have to complain about is that I have to wait for the next chapter. Fantasitc job.
*hugs* Thanks so much! chapter 4 is complete and at the betareader's house... Hopefully, she'll have it back soon. *Jeopardy music begins to play*

Stella: *glares*
Rose: :lol:
Shinobi wrote:You did a great job capturing Sousuke's formal demeanor and yet had plenty of emotion behind it as well. Bravo!
^___^ Thanks so much! This is really my first time writing them, and I really wanted to get it right. I'm so glad you think they're in character. :)

Thanks so much for reading!

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Post by The Engrish Spy »

That was great Rose. Can't wait for chapter four.
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Post by PeRiDoTs13 »

wow. that wuz wonderful. i read it on ff.net 1st, but as they don't allow 4 nc-17 fics, i came here 2 read wut wuz left out. and i'm telling u, this wuz great. i luved it. i can't wait 4 the next chapter! yay!!! :D
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Post by Eclipse »

Oh my.
Ohhhhh my

This was good, this was so, so, good. I loved the "highly inefficent" comment, and I must agree with whoever said that Sousuke REALLY needed some citrus to loosen him up. :wink: But I couldn't find the 4th chapter, is it not out yet? :cry: *sniffle*
:salute: Great fic!

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Post by Lady Saffir »

Rose, are you sure you don't have Sousuke (and Heero, for that matter) tied up in your spare bedroom? He's very IC - are you making him type what he'd do in each situation? ^_~

^_^

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Post by Vampiric »

AAARGH! *dies with the cuteness and the omg it's so great and I can't wait for more-ness*
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