[Poem] Temptress Venus (Lime)

Andrea · Post by **Andrea** » Mon Nov 10, 2003 8:14 pm

<b>Temptress Venus</b>
By Andrea Sinisterra
Rated R
Warning: Lime content.

<b>Author's note:</b> My shot on a merrier poem.

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Deep, ocean blue
Clear sky depths
Her eyes, crystal mirrors
Lights of peace and freedom

Luminescent at night
Iridescent by day
Twinkles of truth
Sparkles of fire and right

Lush pinks, almost crimson
Her lips, thirsty for passion
Soft and full, I'm helpless
Surrender to their deep fervors

Her skin, peaches in winter
Palest marble, flawless surface
Hot with desire
Welcoming... embracing

Together, we discover
New heights, far beyond
Rumors and secrets
Tempting us beyond control

We strive,
Our one and only goal
The sea of stars we reach
And to the bottomless ocean, we fall

Our haste does not exist
Our movements, deep and slow
Bathed in desire, we kiss
And stumbling into passion, we go

A witch of the wickedest craft
A temptress with her skills
She lures me into oblivion
This goddess of the heavens of Venus

Comparisons lack
Just as no star is similar to another
This beauty of gold and ivory
This spider with its cobweb has me trapped

Her power over me is overbearing
Her strength relying on her body
I am helpless but to follow her lead
A useless slave, willing and submissive

Exhaustion wanders over us
Breathless whispers over parted lips
Exchange of pleasantries all too empty
Collapsing into our dreamless worlds

Like this we lay at last
Our hungers satiated, but far from extinguished
On this bed, our secrets we keep
In the cloak of darkness
From prying eyes, in peace we sleep

~Fin~

Kari · Post by **Kari** » Mon Nov 10, 2003 8:21 pm

Well this poem I really like. Again I'm going to say that I love it.Beautiful written and bring on more. Especially SB2. *grins*
Kari

bookworm · Post by **bookworm** » Mon Nov 10, 2003 8:27 pm

I agree w/ Kari. Beautiful poem. And one that I like.

Kari · Post by **Kari** » Mon Nov 10, 2003 8:29 pm

Bookworm. You're my friend now. *shakes hand*

Kari

Morrighan · Post by **Morrighan** » Mon Nov 10, 2003 8:39 pm

Andrea, this is really good!!! I'm very impressed!!

Elyn Yuy · Post by **Elyn Yuy** » Mon Nov 10, 2003 11:58 pm

Oooh, sapp!!!

yummy!!! grabs a straw.

eyes slurp up all info she can.

*I woke up early for strange reason...

I went to bed late too....

Great job!!!

Elyn Yuy

shadowcat · Post by **shadowcat** » Tue Nov 11, 2003 2:20 am

well, this is very well written!! i am proud to admit that i am not a poet, i can't even make ryhmes!! i am very impressed at this poem!!

-Shadow

melrose_stormhaven · Post by **melrose_stormhaven** » Tue Nov 11, 2003 5:25 am

lovely poem...gads, I wish I could write like that!

Calla Lily · Post by **Calla Lily** » Tue Nov 11, 2003 3:10 pm

Cool, I liked it. Yes, it was lime, but with the way you wrote, it didn't make it such a big deal... you're confused you say?
My point: the poem showed more to them than just 'attraction,' it was ROMANTIC...
(slaps herself in the head for usual reasons)

Andrea · Post by **Andrea** » Wed Nov 12, 2003 9:22 pm

Would you all believe me if I told you I forgot about this poem? Hahaha..! And 7 reviews!! WOW!! So happy! I'm always happy!

Anyway, so glad you people liked this one. Got a little down with the response from Heaven in Your Arms, but this one sure made up for it! See why I'm happy?! Also glad because I SO enjoyed writing this one. Thinking about writing a one-shot lemon, though, I don't know if I have the time, or energy, but thinking about it anyway... Okay, need to go.

Blissful Ignorance

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