i'm still waiting on that lemony goodness... and since most of the replies so far have been comedy-based i thought i'd go for full out WAFF... with a tinge of lime...
Parched
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word count: 118 (i tried, i really did)
It was like watching rhinestones scattering on silk.
They kissed her brow, smoothed a path down her flushed cheek and glossed her lips playfully. The tip of her pink tongue darted out to taste the wetness on her lips. The trail continued down her chin, along the column of her pale throat, where it trembled slightly at her pulse. It gathered at her collarbone, dipping between her breasts, gliding downward.
Suddenly, a warm mouth covered the water droplets that had been flowing down Relena?s body as she showered. An agile tongue licked at her moist skin, trying to quench its thirst.
And it seemed that this was not enough nourishment, for Heero?s mouth rose to meet her own, to drink his fill there.
(take that raine!!! i'll get u my pretty!! and ur little minions too!)
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Very nice! I like it! Wonderfully written, as usual. Hopefully you'll answer mt challenge? Please? Nobody has. 
Anyway, great story!
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Ooh.... He-he-he.... Heero might be getting some, ne??? 
Great job!!!
Great job!!!
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hee hee.
wonderful counter attack Miaka!
nothing like Grade A Vitamin C.
wonderful counter attack Miaka!
nothing like Grade A Vitamin C.
"You see, my plan is working. For it is written that 'if the wise man always appears stupid, his failures do not disappoint, and his success gives pleasant surprise."
Maggie smacked my leg. "That is not written."
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Gah! I just can't resist limes. Specially when written by you. So this is your counter attack against my evil force, huh? Lol. Nicely done. I just love your drabbles!
And you'll do as my partner in crime in terms of dealing out the challenges. Woot! I have a partner in crime. Though one that actually embraces fluff
Well done, Miaka. As always.
And you'll do as my partner in crime in terms of dealing out the challenges. Woot! I have a partner in crime. Though one that actually embraces fluff
Well done, Miaka. As always.
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Nice description, lovely brain candy indeed. Gives me that overall tingly feeling
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You write so pretty! That was the only word I could think of to describe it. You can see who needs to work on her description. Sigh. Good drabble.
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