They don't write 'em like that anymore....all I can say is woah. That was sensual brilliance. That song already sends thoughts like that through my head, and your style painted the fantasy beautifully. Wow. That. Was. Amazing.
I need to go take a cold shower.
~ice princess
Fumbling Towards Ecstasy (NC-17)
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Hahaha!! Wow, well, this IS my first lemon... who says there won't be a second... or a third?? And about other stories... well, I'm working on a comedy fic... I find it hilarious, but maybe it's just me... related to Heero and Relena, and an apartment, and rats and fire... (huh!?), but, yes.... AND, Somewhere Out There... the angst is KILLING ME! Just don't give up on me... gimme time...Kari wrote: I like the story, I like the song , I like the lemon and I agree with freelight your writing is fantastic. You should try for another lemon.
Make more stories please.................
See me begging
pretty please......
Well, this is a one-shot, basically... and there won't be a sequel.. I think... but, nothing is set in stone... oh, well... thank you!! Hahaha!lilac310 wrote: I say, ur doin an awesome job in this songfic!
Yeah, I totally agree with you... that song has power of its own. <blush> I'm really liking the response to this fic!!!!!ice princess wrote: That was sensual brilliance. That song already sends thoughts like that through my head, and your style painted the fantasy beautifully. Wow. That. Was. Amazing.
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Ooh, lemony fresh! I agree with everyone else. This fic is beautifully written, in just the right tone to make it sensual, but not pure smut. This has a deeper meaning to it, and I love it. Keep up the good work! 
PS Write more lemons! This was great!
PS Write more lemons! This was great!
"If complete and utter chaos were lightning, then he'd be the sort to stand on a hilltop in a thunderstorm wearing wet copper armor and shouting 'All gods are bastards.'" -The Color of Magic, by Terry Pratchett
"If you think that by threatening me you can get me to do whatever you want," pause "--well, that's where you're right." - Buffy
"If you think that by threatening me you can get me to do whatever you want," pause "--well, that's where you're right." - Buffy
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I was wary... You said you THOUGHT it was fluff, but the rating finally won me over (yeah, yeah, Rose is a sucker for good 1xR lemons, her secret is out). So, now, I'm here procrastinating for a minute because I REALLY don't want to work on Shameless right now (but I'm down to 6 days), and huzzah! This was just what I needed! Not TOO fluffy, but everything in the right amount. 
Well done, and lessee, looks like I have another lemon writer to pester (goodness knows AOD is just flat out stubborn). What does that mean, exactly? That I expect more like this one! Double huzzah!
In all seriousness, thanks so much. This really was well done and I enjoyed it thoroughly. Oh, and I'm not kidding about pestering you for more lemons.
*hugs*
Well done, and lessee, looks like I have another lemon writer to pester (goodness knows AOD is just flat out stubborn). What does that mean, exactly? That I expect more like this one! Double huzzah!
In all seriousness, thanks so much. This really was well done and I enjoyed it thoroughly. Oh, and I'm not kidding about pestering you for more lemons.
*hugs*
Love,
Rose
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Rose
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That's the spirit, rose!
"If complete and utter chaos were lightning, then he'd be the sort to stand on a hilltop in a thunderstorm wearing wet copper armor and shouting 'All gods are bastards.'" -The Color of Magic, by Terry Pratchett
"If you think that by threatening me you can get me to do whatever you want," pause "--well, that's where you're right." - Buffy
"If you think that by threatening me you can get me to do whatever you want," pause "--well, that's where you're right." - Buffy
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yay! great fic.
it's been a while scince I've read a lemon this good.
have you thought about a Rel POV? hee hee.
i'm unhealthily addicted.
3 cheers for 1xR lemony goodness!!!!!!!!!!
it's been a while scince I've read a lemon this good.
have you thought about a Rel POV? hee hee.
i'm unhealthily addicted.
3 cheers for 1xR lemony goodness!!!!!!!!!!
"You see, my plan is working. For it is written that 'if the wise man always appears stupid, his failures do not disappoint, and his success gives pleasant surprise."
Maggie smacked my leg. "That is not written."
"Sure it is, Imbeciles three, verse seven."
~Bif and Maggie, Lamb by Christopher Moore
Nobody's perfect. Well, there was this one guy, but we killed him.
~Anonymous
Maggie smacked my leg. "That is not written."
"Sure it is, Imbeciles three, verse seven."
~Bif and Maggie, Lamb by Christopher Moore
Nobody's perfect. Well, there was this one guy, but we killed him.
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Andrea
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Thank you. I shall write another lemon in the near future, I promise.War Dove wrote: Wow, this was really well written. Like Beck said it had good balance.
I most certainly hope this isn't the last lemon you ever write.
Hahaha, be easy on yourself. Yes, I believe Heero has suffered a lot, why not let him enjoy some, right?Miyuchan wrote: I can't believe I missed this when it was posted last week! *smacks self* What a wonderful story. Hot, steamy, angsty just the way a lemon should be. Heero always gets what he wants in the end anyway.
Your words are very much appreciated, Elyra. I will write more lemons... But, hey, you have to keep the smooth flow of the updates of 'Not my Cup of Tea'!!! OR else!elyra-chan wrote: This fic is beautifully written, in just the right tone to make it sensual, but not pure smut. This has a deeper meaning to it, and I love it. Keep up the good work!
PS Write more lemons! This was great!
I believe that when people read 'Lemon', 'Lime', or 'NC-17', they are instantly tempted... I'm a sucker for lemons also... though, it's hard to find 'good' lemons out there, that's why I was weary of writing one, I thought people would be picky and would flame my butt to Hell and back...blackrose wrote: I was wary... You said you THOUGHT it was fluff, but the rating finally won me over (yeah, yeah, Rose is a sucker for good 1xR lemons, her secret is out). So, now, I'm here procrastinating for a minute because I REALLY don't want to work on Shameless right now (but I'm down to 6 days), and huzzah! This was just what I needed! Not TOO fluffy, but everything in the right amount.
Well done, and lessee, looks like I have another lemon writer to pester (goodness knows AOD is just flat out stubborn). What does that mean, exactly? That I expect more like this one! Double huzzah!
In all seriousness, thanks so much. This really was well done and I enjoyed it thoroughly. Oh, and I'm not kidding about pestering you for more lemons.
..................harrassment is a felony, Rose, so back off!
And about Shameless, you must finish that on time, or I'll be forced to turn the tables on you.... it's not a threat, but a promise.