Whispered and Heard :: Chapter 1

Mission briefing: KGB threatening code name WHISPERED candidates. Believed target: Kaname Chidori, 16, Tokyo, Japan.
Mission status: Critical<br>
Mission personnel: Sergeant Magjor Melissa Mao; Sgt. Kurz Weber, and Sgt. Sousuke Sagara, Arm-Slave specialist; Mission objective: To protect Kaname Chidori from KGB kidnapping plot, without alerting the Japanese gov't or target as to the identity of super-secret military organization, code-named MITHRIL. <br>
Kaname: Why are you following me?!
Sousuke: It's just coincidence.

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Eden
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Post by Eden »

I just read your fic, . . . Wow! It's so good! I hope that you update it soon cause your leaving me soo hanging on by the tips of my fingers! I really gotta know what happens to Kaname, and what Sagara is gonna do when he hears her message, . . . :eek:

This is crazy good!

~Eden
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Post by Kaname Fan Whipper »

Oh thank you very much Eden. The past two weeks has been hectic.. No time to write anything yah know.. And what sucks is I have chapter 3 doen now I just gota find my beta reader or someone and post it. Thank you so much for your compliment and means so much to me. I promise Ill do my best work!

-Re-Lee
Hentai BAKA!!!!! *whap whap whap* Aww.. poor thing.. *kisses poor whapped boy*
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Post by pilot03 »

Looks like I finally lost that angry mob.. I was getting tired of running.
\\\"First you want to kill me, now you want to kiss me........blow.\\\" - Ash;Evil Dead

\\\"I''''m just living a dream I can''''t wake up from....\\\"
- Spike Spigel; Cowboy Bebop

*Ravisher in training* Club Beer

<s>Long Live for a reasonable time expectancy 3xR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! </s>

Thief of panties and hearts... 8)

<s>Part-time coffee boy..</s> :dunno:

Ph.d. of Pervertness :cheer:

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Post by Kaname Fan Whipper »

*"Mysteriously" pops out of some bushes that just happened to be right above him... and hops on his back* I got you now!!!!!!!!
Hentai BAKA!!!!! *whap whap whap* Aww.. poor thing.. *kisses poor whapped boy*
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Post by darkbane »

Hey, KFW, I'd be happy to proofread your work if you want me to. I have some free time this week.

Email me at stani@unitspace.com if you're interested.
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Post by pilot03 »

*struggles with KFW* Captured by the enemy.....just kill me. I could tickle your feet again? *whap, whap, whap* OUCH!!!!
\\\"First you want to kill me, now you want to kiss me........blow.\\\" - Ash;Evil Dead

\\\"I''''m just living a dream I can''''t wake up from....\\\"
- Spike Spigel; Cowboy Bebop

*Ravisher in training* Club Beer

<s>Long Live for a reasonable time expectancy 3xR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! </s>

Thief of panties and hearts... 8)

<s>Part-time coffee boy..</s> :dunno:

Ph.d. of Pervertness :cheer:

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Karama's Koabito
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Post by Karama's Koabito »

*Ahem* I hope I'm not interupting you. *Tapping foot, and giving Pilot03/KFW a very suspicious look :lol: * Anyway *cocking shotgun* Shall we get down to buisness. *_*
Karama: You should come play cards with us, its like family.
Hiei: Karama if you don't shut up I'll rip out your precious voice-box.
Karama: ^_^
Hiei: Hn.
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Post by Karama's Koabito »

Re-lee you better give me a sneek peek of chapter 3,4,5,6,7,..... You get my drift.*To every one else* I'm sorry, but I'm more special then you. :-P
Karama: You should come play cards with us, its like family.
Hiei: Karama if you don't shut up I'll rip out your precious voice-box.
Karama: ^_^
Hiei: Hn.
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Post by Karama's Koabito »

lol, I'm kidding!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't hurt me. :cry: I'm so ashamed.
Karama: You should come play cards with us, its like family.
Hiei: Karama if you don't shut up I'll rip out your precious voice-box.
Karama: ^_^
Hiei: Hn.
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Post by pilot03 »

pilot03: Get behind me KFW. Retreat while I handle this terrorist.*pulls out gun*
KFW: *backs away a few steps then pulls out fan* No way!!
Karama's Koabito: Give me the next chapters...or else!!!!
pilot03: You will not harm Kaname. *shoots warning shot* Nor will you get the next chapter earlier then everyone else....I will.
KFW: *slams fan on pilot03's head* BAKA!!!!
\\\"First you want to kill me, now you want to kiss me........blow.\\\" - Ash;Evil Dead

\\\"I''''m just living a dream I can''''t wake up from....\\\"
- Spike Spigel; Cowboy Bebop

*Ravisher in training* Club Beer

<s>Long Live for a reasonable time expectancy 3xR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! </s>

Thief of panties and hearts... 8)

<s>Part-time coffee boy..</s> :dunno:

Ph.d. of Pervertness :cheer:

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