[gift fic] 'Noche del Luna' (2xR)

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[gift fic] 'Noche del Luna' (2xR)

Post by Beck »

I forgot all about this fic that someone wrote for me two yrs ago for my birthday. Was checking some 2xR archives on a ML I'm on and came across it and thought you'd guys would like to read it as well.


Enjoy! :salute:



Disclaimers: Don't own them, don't claim to. Entertainment purposes only, no money being made.

Warnings: Sap, AU, OOC, Citrus, Waff

Pairings: Duo/Relena

Author: Dhuron

Notes: This is for Beck, Happy Birthday!! I hope this makes you smile! This is the Sequel to 'A Moment of Reflection'

~~*~~ scene change

'Noche del Luna'


Gentle wisps of air caressed the earth, feather light touches upon the cool surface. Pale light fell from the sky, the moon shining among the stars. The night was quiet and peaceful, leaves flowing through the air. Nature molded to the soft, burning love of the two newly weds, offering her gifts to the young couple.

Light flickered around the small room, a roaring fire flickering in the fireplace. Sheer curtains were pulled back; the bed was draped with soft silken sheets of violet and carnation hues. Two roses were laid upon the pillows, crossed at the steams. Laying on the nightstand were two perfect champagne glasses, both half full. In the center of the room, the two newly weds stood; their hands clasped together and they looked into each other's eyes.

Relena smiled, through her tears, at her new husband. Finally she received the greatest gift in existence; the man that held her heart was hers for eternity. Together, hand in hand, they would leave the past behind. She wanted to declare her love, shout it out at the top of her lungs, but her voice was lost. Drowning within a sea of blue, yet Relena Maxwell didn't fight to stay above.

Duo's hand rose to her cheeks, brushing away the tears that marred her beauty. He didn't stop the tears from falling from his eyes; after so long he found peace. He brought their joined hands to his lips, turning her hand and kissed her palm lovingly. Words were inadequate, so Duo showed her how much he loved her. Fire crackled within its mantle, sensing the love rolling off of Duo and Relena.

"Duo?" she whispered, praying with all her heart it wasn't a dream; that they were finally able to be together.

"I'm here, Relena." Duo responded, knowing what she was thinking, being afraid of the same thing. Everything was perfect, and it terrified him.

"I love you, so much." Relena said, raising her hand to his face; her fingers gliding over her husband's cheek. "I know my words can never express how much you mean to me, Duo you are my heart throughout space and time. You are my one and only, my first true friend and my only love. I want us to share one heart, body, and soul."

Duo couldn't speak; Relena had left him breathless once again. He pulled her closer to him, bringing his lips to meet hers. Time slowed, distorted as they expressed love through a simple kiss. Forever and an eternity was their pledge to one another, pouring boundless love into the passionate embrace.

Two souls embraced, rejoicing as they found their other half.

~~*~~

Relena looked upon her husband as he slowly disrobed, watching as perfection was revealed before her eyes. In her opinion, he was breathtaking. The dying fire cast a light glow upon the room; while the moon bathed her husband with its light. The young woman held her breath while his boxer shorts slid down his legs, to the floor. She held out her hand, silently asking him to join her on the bed.

Duo took his wife's hand, pausing for a moment. He wanted Relena to be as happy as he was, to give her his soul. He leaned down; kissing her with tenderness as he slowly lowered himself onto her.

"I love you, Rel," he whispered to his wife while he reached for her hand, intertwining their fingers. He deepened their kiss, gliding his tongue over her lips, sliding into her mouth after she parted them.

Relena tightened her hold on Duo's hand, her other hand ran down his back, exploring every inch of his body. She arched into him, gasping into the kiss as her body was slowly set aflame. Relena pulled back from the kiss, needing to breathe; she looked into her husband's passion filled eyes.

Duo watched his wife's face as he ran his fingers over her body, touching her soft skin. "You're perfect, love." He whispered, running his hand over her breast. "I'm yours; and only yours Rel."

Relena lifted her head from the pillow, kissing Duo softly, deeply. She couldn't find her voice; it abandoned her when her husband's hand began touching her. All she could do was feel, and be enveloped in passion's rapture.

Duo carefully moved his hand from her breast to run down her stomach, in a ghost of a caress to tease her. His lips silenced any whimpers that she would have made. Duo's hand continued to move down, leaving trails of fire in its wake, until it rested on one of Relena's thighs.

"Duo," she moaned out, letting him spread her legs apart; she sighed into his mouth as he ran long fingers down her thigh. Sweet shivers ran across her body, Relena was slowly going mad. "Please," she asked.

"Anything for you, Rel," Duo replied. He moved slowly, not wanting to hurt his wife. With gentle tenderness, he slid inside her; biting his lower lip to keep from crying out. Duo brushed Relena's bangs out of her eyes, caressing her cheek soothingly while he entered her body: he distracted her with soft kisses, loving words and gentle touches.

Relena focused on her husband's face, his soft eyes and whispering lips. She let go, allowing herself to freely fall into the blossoming ecstasy; joining the man she loved in pure passion as their hearts beat as one.

Duo leaned down; taking her lips in another deep kiss as his hips slowly began to thrust, with infinite care.

"I love you, Duo," Relena took her husband's hand, needing to hold onto it while they surrendered to the waves of ecstasy. Her back rose off the bed, forming a perfect arch while her body began to tremble. Each thrust, every movement sent passion through her, ripples in the water. Declarations of love left her lips, in a repeating mantra, binding them together.

"Rel?" Duo said, adoringly. His words of undying happiness and love joined hers. He placed a kiss on her neck, slowly moving to her sweet lips. His own body began to shake from the emotions and passion; he finally let go, knowing Relena would be there to catch him.

They both stopped thinking, trying or willing, finally feeling and being. Love washed over them, as Duo and Relena reached the peak. Twin cries of rapture echoed through the room, both breathless from the intensity of their union. Their eyes met once again, thousands of words passed between them. Duo raised a shaking hand to his wife's face, cupping her cheek with loving gentleness.

"I love you, Relena."

"And I love you forever, Duo."

The two soul mates slowly fell into a deep, peaceful slumber. Duo held his wife in his arms, holding her as close to him as possible. The moon continued to shine in the sky, glowing down upon the couple.

Love, forever.

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Post by Kanya Barton »

Beautiful...that's all I can say is beautiful.
Beck you've done it once again! You've captured the sweet tenderness of two newly weds on their first night together...this was just perfect! Gosh...I can't find any words...:lol:
Peace out! :D
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Post by SimplyTurquoise »

Dhuron... whomever this author is... they did a great job!
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Kanya Barton wrote:Beautiful...that's all I can say is beautiful.
Beck you've done it once again! You've captured the sweet tenderness of two newly weds on their first night together...this was just perfect! Gosh...I can't find any words...:lol:
Peace out! :D
As much as I WISH I could take credit for this lovely fic, I can't. And can you believe that the person who wrote this was a guy??

I too love sappy moments for this couple, seems to fit in with each other.
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SimplyTurquoise wrote:Dhuron... whomever this author is... they did a great job!
This fic was quite a surprise to me when they posted it back in the days :wink: And can you believe that a guy actually wrote this??? I was impressed (considering that he was more of a yaoi fan). I love sappy moments with this couple.
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Post by lilac310 »

Nice story.....loved ur title BTW.....spanish....night of the moon :salute: :-P :D
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lilac310 wrote:Nice story.....loved ur title BTW.....spanish....night of the moon :salute: :-P :D
DANKU!!! I've always wondered what the title meant. :bounce:
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Post by Sovereign of Silence »

what a beautiful fanfic aww... so sweet it bring tears to my eyes :cry: keep up the good work 8) :D
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Post by Nausica? »


That was sweet beyond words, Beck. And an awesome birthday present that Dhuron gave you.

Thanks for sharing...

* muah *


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Post by Weaver Atropos »

A guy wrote it? Wow...well, I probably shouldn't be so biased (considering that guys have some sort of emotion, too) but whenever I read fics written by guys they tend to be all gung-ho and unromantic about *EVERYTHING*. Twas a nice piece. ^_~
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