This Last Moment
If you see the sign,
Would you read between the lines?
Try to understand
Why I can not
The bridge is crumbling
As we are running
It?s burning at our feet
We both know,
You should not tell me that you love me
So look me in the eye
Just give me one reason
Tell me what I am feeling
Do not pull me close
Do not push me away
Seduce me,
With a spell of intricately woven words
Make me see the dream
The very thing we can not hold
There is so much we could have
I know this and yet I can not ask
I dare not speak,
Nor can I watch this come undone
If I close my eyes,
Can I will this away?
I need to hold you
How do I let you go?
A.N. - Sometimes you have to let go, ya know. It hurts but it's the only way to move on. As they say... "dusk before dawn."
This Last Moment (poem)
Moderator: Melville's Best Friend
-
- Bishounen Strip Club Special Guest|Mobile Armor Pilot in Training
- Posts: 393
- Joined: Wed Jun 11, 2003 9:51 pm
- Location: On permanent vacation from reality.
This Last Moment (poem)
Do not measure life by the number of breaths you take but rather by the moments that take your breath away.
Some things belong on paper, others in life. It's a blessed fool who can't tell the difference. - Madeleine "Quills"
Some things belong on paper, others in life. It's a blessed fool who can't tell the difference. - Madeleine "Quills"
-
- Assistant Manager of Club Beer||VP of Product Testing - BI Hentai Club
- Posts: 8490
- Joined: Sun Jul 07, 2002 6:00 pm
- Location: Enjoying the summer
- Contact:
I know exactly how you feel. Recently, I let go of the first person I've ever fallen in love with, as much as it hurt to do so. I cannot tell you how many times I've wished the very things that you expressed in this poem... And you know all too well how much it hurts...
<i>?I always know you?re about to say something very sweet or very stupid when you use my full name??</i>
Why yes, I <i>am</i> a saucy wench.
<a href=\"http://morrighangw.livejournal.com\">Portal Into Immortality</a>
<a href=\"http://morrighangw.deviantart.com\">deviantART Profile</a>
<a href=\"http://namelessagency.livejournal.com\">The Nameless Agency</a>
<a href=\"http://building65.livejournal.com\">Building 65</a>
Why yes, I <i>am</i> a saucy wench.

<a href=\"http://morrighangw.livejournal.com\">Portal Into Immortality</a>
<a href=\"http://morrighangw.deviantart.com\">deviantART Profile</a>
<a href=\"http://namelessagency.livejournal.com\">The Nameless Agency</a>
<a href=\"http://building65.livejournal.com\">Building 65</a>
-
- Fanfic Connoisseur|NewType
- Posts: 137
- Joined: Thu Aug 07, 2003 11:22 am
- Location: A place that I like to call Hell
I had to let go of my first major crush n it hurt!
but know i have a new crush who i like n i THINK he likes me to. n hes stares at me but wont talk 2 me. so yea i know wha its like n tha poem expresses how i felt. i dont wha i will do if this crush falls through! 


Its all fun and games until a rampaging robot destroys half your city! ~*~
Oh...Thats a gun... - George (Case Closed) ~*~
Whats the cause of death?... We believe it is the knife in his back...- Case Closed ~*~
I only eat people who are not full of crap ~*~
Oh...Thats a gun... - George (Case Closed) ~*~
Whats the cause of death?... We believe it is the knife in his back...- Case Closed ~*~
I only eat people who are not full of crap ~*~
-
- Anime Junkie
- Posts: 1085
- Joined: Wed Mar 03, 2004 5:06 am
- Location: somewhere between Smallville and Gotham
- Contact:
We both know,
You should not tell me that you love me
So look me in the eye
Just give me one reason
Tell me what I am feeling
Do not pull me close
Do not push me away

I like this poem heaps

So true *sniff*A.N. - Sometimes you have to let go, ya know. It hurts but it's the only way to move on. As they say... "dusk before dawn."
Great job Lara.