Maybe (poem)

[cherryflavored1R]

Okay, second poem, based on personal experiance entirely. Wrote it a long time ago (ha ha! three months ago)

Sorry that it sucks.

Maybe

I waited for you to tell me I was wrong about my feelings
But you didn?t
You haven?t
Not yet.

And you never told me how you felt?
You didn?t
You haven?t
You probably won?t.

But I have hope
I guess I can?t live without hope
So I?ll wait for you.
As long as I can,
I promise I will.

You told me you would come back
But even if you do, you won?t look for me
You won?t
I know it
But I?ll still believe you will

Just for a chance to see you again?
And maybe
Hopefully
You?ll smile

Maybe even smile at me.

(Sorry again that it sucks. Please review, good or bad.)

-Cherry

[Morrighan]

Now that seems like something I would do as well. As much as we wish otherwise, life isn't the kindest thing in the world.

Wonderful job, Cherry!

[Eienvine]

Aiee! You're probably sick of hearing from me, but that was absolutely fabulous! I adore your writing; you express so much in so few words. Brava!

[Lara Winner]

Nope, does not suck! This nearly brought tears to my eyes because, again, I've felt overlooked and invisible to the person I loved. Although in my reality, after years of friendship, he didn't look for me and now he's been married twice, has three kids and just turned twenty-four years old this summer... *sighs* but I digress. *hugs* Excellent!