Practice Makes Perfect (Drabble Challange # 8)

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Practice Makes Perfect (Drabble Challange # 8)

Post by War Dove »

Never did a drabble before, so this is my first (no pun intended) .

The idea came to me, I hope ya guys like.


Title: Practice Makes Perfect
Rating: G
Word Count: 120
Pairing: 1xR


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Sighing, Relena stared down at her boyfriend.

“I told you to lick your lips first. I can’t help you if your mouth doesn’t cooperate.”

Heero looked up at her. “I’m trying it’s just...”

“It’s your first time doing this, a little more practice and you’ll be as good at it as Duo.”

“Duo’s had a lifetime of practice.”

She pushed him back down, stopping him from rising. “No excuse. Now stay down there, and try not to drool.”

He remained sitting in the chair. Soon the corners of his mouth turn upward, his lips parted and the pearly white of his teeth showed.

Relena gasped in delight. “That’s it! I knew you could smile Heero, if you really, really tried!”

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Post by J Alberghini »

Aw, Heero's smiling. :D Good job!
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Post by AngelOfDeath »

Hehe

Ooooo. ::pinches Heero's cute smiling face.... has gun drawn on her::

:eek:

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Aww... That was cute!! Heero's first smile! :D
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Post by Elyn Yuy »

huh, But he smiled evily in the first episode.

after laughing evily.

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Post by Morrighan »

Elyn Yuy wrote: huh, But he smiled evily in the first episode.

after laughing evily.
But that doesn't count. It wasn't a REAL smile. That was more like a smirk. That laugh in the Japanese version (no dub! Yay!) scared the sh*t out of me the first time I heard it... I worship Hikaru Midorikawa; he rocks my world with his sexy voice and his awesome singing. :D
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Post by raine_yuy »

*LOL*

That was friggin funny. Relena having to teach Heero how to smile? Haha. And the thought of Heero drooling while learning such a basic thing is just...strange. But very cute and well...sappy. Great job for a first drabble. Although for a minute there my hentai mind was picturing something else happening with those two. Har har.
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Post by Beck »

You know, this also could lead a person to think she was teaching him to whistle. Both ideas fit him though. In fact, it also sounded like something that Sousuke would have to learn and not look like he was straining, kinda like him "smiling" for his transfer papers in the first season (same eps as the condom bit)
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