Cuffs & Contracts 3/3 (lemon)

[Kuno-baby]

DAMMMMMNNNNNN! Well worth the wait...for Heero and Relena and the reader. Great ending to a hot fic. Sad to see it go, but I'll be eager to read your next fic.
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Kuno-baby: But officer, he was dead when I found him!

Officer: Get in the car Kuno-baby, you say that every time!

[zapenstap]

woah. i haven't read a lemon in awhile. i liked that. not too much description of thoughts to get in the way. i can;t decribe exactly waht i like about it, but it was good. tasteful but still er...erotic. i like it. good work.

[blackrose]

MWAHAHAHAHA! I have a new weapon!

The Spaghetti Noodle of... of...

Let's see, Noodle of Death, Stick of Ultimate Destruction (thunder clap), Cattle prod of Doom, what's left?

How about Spaghetti Noodle with a Criminal Record? Eh?

BI masses: *groan*

Yeah yeah, I know. Mr. BR's puns, very very BAD puns, must be rubbing off. *scrubs skin clean*

The Spaghetti Noodle of ANNIHILATION! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Or, I could just use it as my back-up Noodle of Death.

But YAY! More of your fic! I think...I see what you mean. THe end was a bit abrupt. I like the sentiment, but considering the lead up, I think it could have been more dramatic if you had drawn it out. There was a purpose that either you didn't bring out because you just wanted to get it done *WAPISH* or that I missed (because you rushed it).

I *think* you were trying to bring across the theme of time.... Time proved and strengthened their emotional bond, made them anticipate this moment as their reward. Time is notorious for being able to break such bonds, but in their case, theirs was too strong. Time only made them love each other more, even if they had to wait for this...beginning if you will.

Yes, it's 3a, and I'm probably drowning everyone in sap.

YAY! Now, about Finding the Reasons Why. *WAPISH*

Crim: Why do I do this to myself?
Rose: Heh. Answer her Stella.
Stella: You have hidden masochistic tendencies combined with a lot of psychological mumbo jumbo and equates to - write more or I'll turn you over to Rose and MBF. *evil cackle*
Crim: -____-;;;

*running tackle glomps* WE MISSED YOU!!!!

Love,
Rose

PS - I love my picture! I'm going to put it someplace fabulous. I just need to figure out where.... *hugs*

[Faye Faye]

Kuno....You stole my icon ::whines:: I had that one specially made for me and uploaded. ::bottom lip trembles:: But... if you really like it, I'll let YOU use it...no one else! ^-^

[Faye Faye]

PS. I LOVED the ending to the story...talk about sexual tensions...Overall Cuffs and Contracts was a great short fic and I look forward to reading more of your work!

Faye Faye

[Kelly_Pure]

HOT with a capital H for down right hotness factor. Man, that was so good I need to go back to chapter 1 and read this entire thing over again. I'm sorry you're done. Well, I hope you post something else soon! God, I love stories like this!
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I feel pretty...oh so pretty, and witty and GAY!!!!Back to top

[Kelly_Pure]

HOT with a capital H for down right hotness factor. Man, that was so good I need to go back to chapter 1 and read this entire thing over again. I'm sorry you're done. Well, I hope you post something else soon! God, I love stories like this!
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I feel pretty...oh so pretty, and witty and GAY!!!!Back to top

[silent muse]

Crim, seriouly don't change a thing! It was wonderful and damn near worth the oh-so-torturous wait!

Can't wait to see what you come up with next!

-muse-

[Fatimai1]

ok! gotta breathe a lil more here wow! im like getting all sweaty here!! that was really emotional and ...hot

[Imperfection]

That was cute and as many others have said before, hot.

What happened to Heero and his little outburst? Getting a little cranky hmmm? Well guess he got what he wanted .... o_o; ~ Imperfection