Let Go PG-13 (poem)

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Let Go PG-13 (poem)

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Poem by me. Feed back and flames are welcome
Warning! If this poem somehow dose happen to upset you in anyway, I apologize, and will remove if asked.



Let go

To let go. . .
Forgotten memories
Lingering pain of what was felt
At times we cope
At times we find
Ourselves. . .
Alone


We wish to let go
Of our troubles
Of our sins
We try one way
Only to be lend another
The path we follow


Is it worth it
To let go
Of everything
Even if it ment
What we treasure most?

-C.G
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Post by Lara Winner »

Lovely poem. I did not find it offensive at all. It was a simple and deep introspective piece. Beautiful!
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Post by Morrighan »

A poem like yours is of the best. Poetry is meant to be deep and introspective, and you've done a great job of it here. It wasn't in anyway offensive!!
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Post by fubberr »

Mauahahaah! I knew i'd enjoy it! :D

Yeah, that poem really relates to me. :D

I feel like... letting go at times because i cannot handle such a thing, that i feel sooo dowwnnn and deepressed. or sometimes i'm just alittle bit weeirrd. :roll:

Anyways.. i love your poem (honestly) i'm gonna keep this poem in my mind when i need it most :D



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Post by Melville's Best Friend »

To clear this up, as I think there was a bit of confusion...

This poem right here *points to poem* is in no way offensive, and is more than welcome. I see no need, myself, for a warning.

This is just to put whatever fears to rest, and to let you all know that I'm not a harsh bastard who gets pissed at the slightest bout of angst.

Well...not TODAY.

^_~

I'm joking. ^__^

Anyway, just to clear that up. ^___^
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Post by C.G »

^^;; better to safe then sorry, you know.
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Post by Melville's Best Friend »

^___^

*glomps C.G*

You are sooooo cute!!!!! *glomps again*

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