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~Forever~
She yelled at him.
He yelled at her.
They sat down and stared.
She looked at him.
He looked at her.
She stuck her tongue out.
He made an obscene jester.
?If you don?t want me I?ll leave.?
?Fine with me.?
?Good bye Heero.?
No response.
As she left he knew he should go to her and ask for forgiveness, but he didn?t. He sat there and let her walk out of his life forever. Forever only lasted 45 minutes and ended with a bullet.
~End~
{Drabble Challenge #4} Forever
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Oh my Goddess... I need more explaination on the end!! 
So sad!!Great job!!
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Why yes, I <i>am</i> a saucy wench.
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Ahhhhh!!!
Total angst! I couldn't have done it better. Man, i wasn't expecting the ending to end with such a...BANG. Pun intended. Great job! You're very good at this considering you got it under 90 words and managed to make it with such an impact. Nicely done!
Total angst! I couldn't have done it better. Man, i wasn't expecting the ending to end with such a...BANG. Pun intended. Great job! You're very good at this considering you got it under 90 words and managed to make it with such an impact. Nicely done!
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