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Under the earth
Surrounded by time
Wind carries your spirit
Your soul with mine.
Decaying in body
You blossom in soul.
Though we are apart, love,
I know we are whole.
You brought me back to life
To dreams that knew no bounds.
You found my tortured soul
And turned it all around.
And when I saw your smiling face,
I knew that I had found my place
Your heart held such Amazing Grace.
You brought me back
To life.
In death
We find our hearts are torn.
Without your shoulder,
My tears were never born.
I hold it all within me
The sadness and regret-
I cannot find without you
My emotional outlet.
You brought me back to life
To dreams that knew no bounds.
You found my tortured soul
And turned it all around.
And when I saw your smiling face,
I knew that I had found my place
Your heart held such Amazing Grace.
You brought me back
To life.
I know that we will be together
One shining golden day.
Through you I?ll find my strength, my love.
You?ll help me find my way.
I?ll find you.
In the next life.
You brought me back to life
To dreams that knew no bounds.
You found my tortured soul
And turned it all around.
And when I saw your smiling face,
I knew that I had found my place
Your heart held such Amazing Grace.
You brought me back
To life.
Under the earth
You?re surrounded by time.
But our hearts beat together.
Your soul is still with mine.
The wind may take you away
From me.
Throughout these years I?ll promise,
I?ll be yours forever.
You brought me back.
Now take me back.
This is a song I wrote with which I was pleased. ^__^ One of the few, peeps. One of the few. I'm not good at poetry. I can write you the tune in an hour. Gimmie a piano, a couple of staves, and a pencil, I'm there.
I hate lyrics. I'm just...not gifted with them. *sighs*
SO! I posted this. Yes, I did.
Gimmie what you think. I'm open for those critics out there. ^_~
btw, just for those who are curious (no one is) it's in A minor...until the key change...then it goes to b minor...which is also easy... ^__^ (easiest minor to play! BWA HAHAHAHAHAHA! I'm a music slacker!)
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Drop it. Like it is hot.
Drop it. Like it is hot.
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That is a beautiful piece of work. Plain and simple. You did an amazing job sis.
You silly thing you. Lyrics are poetry. Songs are poems. You are a budding poet/songstress.
I'm proud of you for posting this. ^_^ Excellent job!!
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You silly thing you. Lyrics are poetry. Songs are poems. You are a budding poet/songstress.
I'm proud of you for posting this. ^_^ Excellent job!!
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You mean you've had to bribe people to review???
PAY UP SISTER!!!!!!!
I am going to feel left out if I don't get paid around here.....
But what I said prior to this post is true.
*glomp*
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PAY UP SISTER!!!!!!!

I am going to feel left out if I don't get paid around here.....
But what I said prior to this post is true.
*glomp*
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Ooh... This is so good! Don't underestimate your own abilities, MBF!!! You never know when inspiration will hit and give you wings, so always expect the unexpected!
I know so from experience.

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