Green (Drabble Challenge #3)

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Green (Drabble Challenge #3)

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<b>Title:</b> Green
<b>Word Count:</b> 100
<b>Rating:</b> PG
<b>Note:</b> Woohoo! 100 words exact. Man, it took practice but i finally got the hang of it. Enjoy!






The sound of the door opening forcefully alerted heads outside the waiting room. The sight of a gun held by a Prussian eyed man startled them into blinking furiously in both consternation and alarm.

Milliardo Peacecraft frowned before moving to intercept the murderous man. A cool hand halted his progress as a cool voice commanded, ?Stay. It?s me he wants.?

Silence descended as the two men faced each other. Prussian blue glinted with betrayal but brilliant greens only stared back in defiant.

?Green eyes.?

?You were gone when she needed you and I wanted her. Your loss.?

?And your child.?


<b>The End</b>

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Post by AngelOfDeath »

:eek:

oh my....

I'm quite impressed......

(poor Heero, and naughty Relena!)
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Post by RyanEX2000 »

*BANG*

And you have to right a sequel.
Cause from the wording Heero obviously thought the child was his.Meaning Relena was praying it was.Besides....I'd like to see how they make up after this.And Raine.....sweetie.....how about a non-angst.....without the clown :-P .

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Post by Morrighan »

Aww... Poor Heero!!! I agree with Ryan!
<i>?I always know you?re about to say something very sweet or very stupid when you use my full name??</i>

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Post by Bella »

Seems to be the best thing said... Poor Heero.
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Post by Nausica? »


* glomps *

I just about fell off my chair! I sure as hell didn't expect that little twist. But it was great, especially since you did make it in 100 words. Feels good, doesn't it?

Congrats on a short n' surprising drabble...

* muah *


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