Caveat Emptor - Chapter IV

Morrighan · Post by **Morrighan** » Tue Jun 17, 2003 1:24 pm

*glares* It better come out soon...

*raises eyebrow* What's up with chapter six, hmm...? Did lilac hit a little too close to the mark than you'd prefer??

C'mon, you know we're all waiting for those smoldering moments between those two...

melodrama · Post by **melodrama** » Tue Jun 17, 2003 3:34 pm

Morrighan wrote: *raises eyebrow* What's up with chapter six, hmm...? Did lilac hit a little too close to the mark than you'd prefer?? C'mon, you know we're all waiting for those smoldering moments between those two...

*whistles and twiddles thumbs* Why Morrighan... whatever could you mean? Heero and Relena in a smouldering moment? How could that be.....?

*asides* Oh for God sake you two.. not yet! Don't you have ANY self control!!??

*coughs* ummmm... okay... to satisfy enquiring minds... LoL... chapter six will have Lime... I do have plans for a 'missing chapter' later on... but I suck at writing lemons, so I'll be honest and say that I'm putting it off.

However... there will be a little more...sexual tension (?) in chapter five, if it ever lets me actually finish it... so... yeah

Love Mel

Morrighan · Post by **Morrighan** » Tue Jun 17, 2003 10:12 pm

Hah! Morri-chan's done it again! She's gotten the answers she wanted!

Mel, you're completely underestimating your ability to write lemons. Honestly. That's a skill that I can't help but envy.

But anyway, make everyone happy and get chapter five out!

luvspook · Post by **luvspook** » Thu Jul 03, 2003 10:47 pm

Woah, Mel!

Now THAT was...*whew* I was seriously hyperventilating back there! This fic is so intense!

I love it!

The scene between Heero and Relena has me absolutely giddy! Not only did you torture him masterfully, but you really convey his agressiveness so well. The way he treats Relena...like he doesn't trust her...when in actuality he doesn't trust himself because of her, it's so perfect! It's so Heero!

And how about that flashback sequence! WOAH! You have truly outdone yourself! I can't wait for the next one!

*hugshugshugs*

Keep up the excellent work, Mel!

dragonlady9 · Post by **dragonlady9** » Fri Jul 04, 2003 8:22 am

Oh, I just love this story!! Please write more soon, I don't know if I could survive the wait!!! Keep writing, you awesome at it!!!! :razz:

melodrama · Post by **melodrama** » Sun Jul 13, 2003 11:52 am

luvspook wrote:Now THAT was...*whew* I was seriously hyperventilating back there! This fic is so intense! I love it!

*hugs* awww Spookyboo... you always write the nicest reviews... makes my day, everytime.

luvspook wrote:The scene between Heero and Relena has me absolutely giddy! Not only did you torture him masterfully, but you really convey his agressiveness so well. The way he treats Relena...like he doesn't trust her...when in actuality he doesn't trust himself because of her, it's so perfect! It's so Heero!

Ah yes, there's almost something theraputic in some good Heero torture, don't you think?

Poor Heero, Relena's really got him on the back foot, and it's only going to get worse from here on in.

Thanks for reading Luvvy!! You so rock! *huggles*

dragonlady9 wrote: Oh, I just love this story!! Please write more soon, I don't know if I could survive the wait!!! Keep writing, you awesome at it!!!!

Thanks so much DL9! I'm so pleased that you are enjoying the story so far. I am literally proof reading Chapter 5 as we speak, so expect to see it in the next few hours. Thanks again!

Gundam Girl · Post by **Gundam Girl** » Mon Sep 06, 2004 7:55 pm

Yay for the goodness.

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