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Word count: 108. (I'm having fun with this, can you tell? This may not be the end, please bear with me.I can never do anything at the minimum.)
Last Date
The restaurant had a romantic glow, candles at each table. It was amazing how so many hearts had been broken and how many glasses were thrown in this atmosphere.
Relena ran her finger around the rim of hers, considering the idea. It was childish, but tempting.
Heero sipped his own to replenish the sweat trickling down his brow. He was oblivious to her thoughts; the words he was about to say stuck between his mouth and his tonsils.
"Relena," he croaked. She looked up, expecting the worst. But then he drew a small black box from his pocket. "Relena, will you marry me?"
The glass fell and shattered.
Last Date (another Drabble Challenge answer)
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J Alberghini
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Last Date (another Drabble Challenge answer)
~J.Alberghini
"He took what he could get, ravenously and unscrupulously- eventually he took Daisy one still October night, took her because he had no real right to touch her hand."
-F.Scott Fitzgerald, The Great Gastby
"He took what he could get, ravenously and unscrupulously- eventually he took Daisy one still October night, took her because he had no real right to touch her hand."
-F.Scott Fitzgerald, The Great Gastby
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Kanya Barton
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Awww, how sweet! It's amazing what people can come with if they are challenged to it! Well, I gotta go!
Peace out!
Peace out!
'Best, you've got to be the best! You've got to change the world and use this chance to be heard. Your time is now!' excerpt from "Butterflies and Hurricanes" by Muse (I love them! Matt Bellamy is teh shit!)
Here's a little known fact: Ninja tears can be used in place of olive oil to add flavor to many dishes, but they all KILL YOU! Think about that the next time that you're cooking with ninja tears...
Here's a little known fact: Ninja tears can be used in place of olive oil to add flavor to many dishes, but they all KILL YOU! Think about that the next time that you're cooking with ninja tears...
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How is it possible to write such a good fic with 108 words?? I have no idea, but you have beaten the odds. I really like how you described the atmosphere, like it was just about to shatter, for good or bad. With Heero in that resturant, I'm pretty sure I know why there's so many broken glasses there!! 
Amazing! Keep it up!
Amazing! Keep it up!
"The point is, you see," said Ford, "that there is no point in driving yourself mad to stop yourself going mad. You might just as well give in and save your sanity for later."
We'll meet beyond the shore
We'll kiss just as before
Happy we'll be beyond the sea
And never again I'll go sailing - Beyond the Sea
We'll meet beyond the shore
We'll kiss just as before
Happy we'll be beyond the sea
And never again I'll go sailing - Beyond the Sea
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Woohoo! Another happy reply to the challenge. As you know, everyone else's response was pretty much angsty. But wonderful job! You managed a little suspense with the use of only a few words. Sweet ending though.
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<font color=gold>When i write, my purpose is not to please you, but to make you think.</font>
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*keels over in a dead faint*Heero: *walks over and dumps a bucket of water on her unceremoniously*
*sits up rapidly* *blinks*
Oh my Goddess, that was so KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great job!!
<i>?I always know you?re about to say something very sweet or very stupid when you use my full name??</i>
Why yes, I <i>am</i> a saucy wench.
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