[Lemon] Timeless 1/1

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I usually am lazy but I just had to post. I loved loved loved the story! Some ppl might say that Heero is a little OC in this but it's been 4 years and it's so refreshing to see him in a different light. I can't imagine him staying cold and unemotional forever and ever. And him acting like he was born into privilege...he was trained to know how to act like that, wasn't he? I loved it! Love the genuine and pure relationship between him and Relena. I wonder if he really did get a marriageable identity or if he just kept Heero Yuy...but I guess since nobody really recognizes him as a Gundam pilot, maybe he did find a marriageable identity. I'm kinda curious, lol.

Anyway, awesome story! Glad you shared it!

[Smarty Cat]

I usually am lazy but I just had to post. I loved loved loved the story! Some ppl might say that Heero is a little OC in this but it's been 4 years and it's so refreshing to see him in a different light. I can't imagine him staying cold and unemotional forever and ever. And him acting like he was born into privilege...he was trained to know how to act like that, wasn't he? I loved it! Love the genuine and pure relationship between him and Relena. I wonder if he really did get a marriageable identity or if he just kept Heero Yuy...but I guess since nobody really recognizes him as a Gundam pilot, maybe he did find a marriageable identity. I'm kinda curious, lol.

Hello! Thanks so much for coming out of lurkdom to leave a comment. It's one of the most flattering things that could happen!

I often think that IC is probably optional in most of my fics (and I will fully admit that Timeless is fluff with little substance), but I also think that Heero emoted more in the series than people usually acknowledge. Part of it may be voice actors too, since I personally found his English voice (lovely and smexy as it was) to be quite a bit more monotone than his Japanese voice. And, yeah, I think there was at least the intention that some of his training was meant to help him blend in... perhaps with dubious success, ha! He's not completely without social skills though, and a bit of arrogance certainly wouldn't be out of place in a member of the upper class.

And I'm sure he did scrounge up a marriageable identity from somewhere although describing the fun legal processes leading to that state of affairs would have bogged down the fic quite a bit.

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*Fans self* Hooooo boy... that...scene... I think...right now... I can only say "aaaaahgnnnngggSEXY." Because damn. That was sexy. I loved the whole thing of course, but man do you write steamy well.

It's interesting that you should say that. IMO Timeless isn't nearly as explicit as some of my past lemons, and I had a lot of insecurity about the quality when I first submitted it to the Church of Lemons a month ago. People seem to like it though. Thanks for your comments!

*smiles* Sometimes less is more. I do not believe that I read your other work before, but this...this was beautiful. Your writing is so classic, or should I say...timeless? The way you illustrate the characters is a treat. I could hear Relena's voice by her choice of words and see Heero's demeanor as well as the interactions they shared.

Absolutely fantastic. And of course, yes, the lemon was well written. It wasn't overdone and it wasn't cliche. It had your own unique writing style and I can always respect an author for that.

Well done. Cheers.

[Smarty Cat]

*smiles* Sometimes less is more. I do not believe that I read your other work before, but this...this was beautiful. Your writing is so classic, or should I say...timeless? The way you illustrate the characters is a treat. I could hear Relena's voice by her choice of words and see Heero's demeanor as well as the interactions they shared.

Absolutely fantastic. And of course, yes, the lemon was well written. It wasn't overdone and it wasn't cliche. It had your own unique writing style and I can always respect an author for that.

Well done. Cheers.

A new reader! Hello! Thanks so much for your kind words. Romance scenes and the appropriate build up to them are always so nerve wracking to write because they can go wrong in so many ways!