Dominance - NC-17 Lemon/Fluff OneShot

Sage103 · Post by **Sage103** » Thu Dec 20, 2007 10:08 pm

OMG. That has to be one of the greatest stories I have read so far.
Forget the cold shower. I need to take a trip to the antarctic.

Write MORE! WRite MORE!!

Penguin on the Shore · Mon Jan 07, 2008 1:51 am

That was very lemony, but I didn't like the course of action. Heero was so not in character. I think he would be much more subtle, and that's sexy. Oh well, maybe it's just because unreal sexual situations are not my bag, baby. Because no one does it like that.

KageOkami-Kogo · Post by **KageOkami-Kogo** » Thu Mar 12, 2009 11:16 am

Hello again for those of you who don't remember me... I re-read this fic and almost gagged lol. I'm currently in the process of fixing it up... I can assure you I have improved in my writing in the past four years so I should be able to make this better XD ...I shall keep ya'll informed.

darklord22 · Post by **darklord22** » Sat Mar 14, 2009 7:11 am

WOW I don't think the shower will be cold enough for me.

KageOkami-Kogo · Post by **KageOkami-Kogo** » Sat Mar 14, 2009 1:59 pm

darklord22 wrote: WOW I don't think the shower will be cold enough for me.

Ah... thanks lol but this is old X_X you should read the newer version

it's a bit more realistic and in character.

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Dominance - NC-17 Lemon/Fluff OneShot

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