Love's Labours Lost

[blackrose]

Heero, Quatre, Van (Escaflowne), and Vash (Trigun) made a pact: no business, no booze, no women, no mercy! Years ago, four wealthy software moguls lost themselves to their company. But now, they stand to lose it all if they fall in love. LOOSELY based on the Shakespearean play of the same name.

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[Pure]

YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!!!!!!! SO GOOD!



~Kat~

[Sovereign of Silence]

as always i love ur stories i'm not finish reading it though ....hey blackrose does this have any lemon

[Big_J117]

YEESSS!!! NEW CHAPTERS!!! This story is so great! I started reading it over the summer but i fell off this site because there didn't seem to be any more activity with it.

Author's Note from Chapter 12: Okay, for those of you who didn't know?. We wrote this into a script entitled The Kings of Navarre, and pitched it to some producers in Los Angeles in November. In January, one got back to us and asked to see the script - which is apparently a big deal, we've been told, especially since we have no agent and this is our first script. This particular production company has very recently passed on the project, but gave us some usable feedback on where our script can be improved (character motivation ? which IS fixable!!!!). But that's what kinda held us up on posting this chapter. It's admittedly a little difficult to work on both at the same time, and the script version changes we did in January burned us out on working on the story for a while. But we are DETERMINED to get through these last like 3 chapters. We are oh SO close, with most of it drafted and just in need of revisions.

I'm really glad to hear that you actually were able to get a production company to review it. Even if they didn't accept it right out the experience and critiques you take away are invaluable.

Please get the last chapter out soon, I can't wait to find out how this all ends. Heero has some serious making up to do This one of those stories that I can read and I find myself laughing out loud, drawing curious stares from my room mates... You've really written the characters well and kept them as we all have known them in their respective animes while putting them all in such a different environment. Well, again, great story and I can't wait to read how it all turns out.

[san]

Wow! This is one major crossover. I really enjoy reading this and it is quite funny. I'm yet another big fan of William Shakespear and I think you did his work great justice. I made one of my co-workers read this and she hadden't even heard of Gundam Wing and she thought it was awsome.

It's just pure enjoyment. Keep up the good work, but I am getting impaitent with Heero. But I know they will eventualy get together again. He's also being really mean to Vash. Poor Vash.


Please post more!!! :razz: :o

[Crazygurl]

I KNOW you're busy, but will this ever get completed? I have a fan club around me who wants to read more!

As soon asyou can, please try to make a semblance of update, or say... that it's over...

Anyway. You're conscious you have THE talent. Don't let it go to waste!

[Wingnut]

Well I finally decided to go and read this fic on ff.net. I was not disappointed in what I read, though there were several times when I wanted to smack Heero for his actions, or lack of action in a couple cases toward Relena.

It also did not escape my eyes that you had Quatre wondering what the Mile High Club was in an early chapter, and at the end of the story become a member of it himself. If this were in the Gundam Wing universe, you would have to have done the same thing, only in zero-g.