Final Mission Status: Chapter 10 (no, i'm not kidding!)

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11krage
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Post by 11krage »

Aw, cliffhangers, really looking forward to the next one. Great job on this chapter

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Post by The Forgotten Pixie »

:D :D :D Yay! An update! Wow, it feels like its been forever but thats ok cus this chapter was AMAZING! :allright: Keep up the good work and update soon. pleasseee

And please please please tell me....Heero isnt dead....is he??? :pale:
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Post by AkizukiMeiko »

NO!!!!! Not Heero!!!! He belongs with Relena.

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Post by Katisha888 »

I am very happy you continued this and will finish it. I've been checking every month since the last chapter you posted (yep, chapter 9) both here and in fanfiction.com :-)

really an exciting story, and I'm even not that pissed that Heero said what he did about their "professional relationship" maybe because I was looking forward to the Cole confrontation.

thank you very much for posting this, it just made my day... :cheer:
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Post by AkizukiMeiko »

No not Herro!!!! He belongs with Relena, I hope that Noin comes to the rescue write more soon!!!!!

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Post by whirlwinds1309 »

YAY!!!! It's finally here!!! :cheer:

Wow... you have no idea how exciting it was for me when I got on and saw that there was a chapter 10! This chapter was AMAZING!!! Please please please keep them coming. I can't wait to find out what happened to Zechs, Wufei, and Heero! I hope they're not hurt... oreven worse... dead... that would a tragedy!

Great work! I love love love it!!!

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Post by hhryah »

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WORST CLIFFHANGER EVER
*flails*
Alright, I admit, I didn't know that chapters 1-9 existed. I started with this one. But it was so well written, and the tension between H/R was great, and I love Wufei, and DON'T KILL DUO OMG NOOOOO and Dorothy is such a bitch and PLEASE don't kill Duo and omgomgomg.

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Post by euthalia »

for some reason, i keep on remembering my beloved fanfiction everytime i get out of prison (read: school) and this is one of my faves. I can tell... my heart jumped when i saw you updated.

On tetherhooks for the next chapter. I love how Relena keeps her cool despite all the confusion she's been through.


Way to Go!!!!


Euthalia :cheer:

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YAAAAAAA

Post by simmer »

ZAP! YOU UPDATED! Thank you so much! I've been watching this story in particular and a few others still on BI - Heero and Relena; I just can't believe their fandom will ever go out of style. AHHH. Anyway I haven't actually *read* the story yet because I am literally running out the door to class and knowing it's posted is alost as bad a cliffhanger as I gather is at the end... but I'm just so EXCITED but I want to savor this... maybe I'll go back and reread the whole fic... Keep writing! Chapters are good! THIS IS AWESOME.

Actual review will be forthcoming :wink:

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Post by Penguin on the Shore »

I think I replied on ff.net when you first posted it there, but I just read it again here, and don't think you would object to yet more feedback.

No offense to your former partner in writing, but I found this chapter to be better written than any of the preceding chapters of Final Mission Status that were written with her. Whether this is because you're writing on your own or because your skills have improved in the VERY LONG time since this fic began I do not know-- in any case, the writing's much better. I also appreciate your dedication to the fic's content through your research. I don't know if I'd have gone that far, so I'm really impressed.

So, given that you've got a ton and a half of possitive feedback that follow endless pleas for you to end your Final Mission Status sabatical, I hope that you will not be taking another one, and that the next chapter will follow with relative speed.

Much love.

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