One-Shot beta wanted (language mostly)

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One-Shot beta wanted (language mostly)

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Edit: I decided to publish the story without a beta-reader, but I leave this post here, just in case.

Hello everyone! :D

I wrote a songfic for the "Full Metal Panic!" fandom, it was originally in italian (because the song is an italian one) but after some thinking I decided to translate it.

What I need mostly is:

*) a second point of view on how I should put the song and the translation in the story
(original song in the story and translation after it; translation of every line near the original one in the story; other settings...)

*) a help for the language: since I had the story already betaed and published in italian, the plot, the adherence to the real story of FMP! and possible OutOfCharather-ness should already be fine; also a beta not really knowledgeable in the FMP! fandom would be good.

You can find the story, in its English version, here

Anyone interested, please send me a PM or an e-mail at skyless_star@libero.it

Thanks
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