Last Wish (drabble challenge response)

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Last Wish (drabble challenge response)

Post by maverickhunter »

Everyone seems to be writing sad responses to this drabble challenge, so I thought I would write a happier one. First time writing, so go a little easy on me. Obviously, I don?t own any of the characters, etc, etc.

Title: Last Wish
Rating: G
Pairing: 1xR
Word count: 100

I look into your sky-blue eyes and see unconditional love. Not just love for the ex-assassin, but for the man I have become in his place.

Five years of restraint; constant denial of what's been there all along. All the looks, touches, and facial expressions. I had ignored them the whole time. What was I thinking all that time? So much of our lives - wasted because of my stupidity.

As I slip the gold ring on your finger, my only, and hopefully last, wish was that I had done this sooner.

?...I now pronounce you ? man and wife.?
Last edited by maverickhunter on Wed May 12, 2004 2:19 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by raine_yuy »

awww...sweetie, that's so sappy and...and...well, sweet!

lol. everyone has been a little angsty as of late. i seriously don't knwo why. but great job for going against the trend and creating such a touching fluff piece. it really made me smile and agve me mushy little feelings. lol. see? look what you just made me write. well done hon!
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Post by AngelOfDeath »

Heero should have done a lot of things sooner. :wink:

It was so melt-y happy. Hooray!
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Post by Nausica? »


I agree with everyone - good for you for going against the trend.

Nicely written and what makes it better is that those two are getting married. Heck yeah, it was about time :D


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Post by Kanya Barton »

Awwww, how sweet! I love all the answers to this challenge so far! Gosh I wish I had the self-discipline to be able to do something like this! Argh...Oh well, I'll leave all that to you guys!
Peace out! :D
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KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D Great job!!!
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