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Title: The Last Day (Answer to Drabble Challenge)
Author: Nausica?
Pairing: 1xR
Rating: G
Word Count: 100
Challenge Topic: A day of ?Lasts?
She always left me at the door with a kiss. It was always sweet.
Today, it had been different. Sweeter. Deeper. It had lingered too, as if she was memorizing the blend of our mouths. She had shaken me with that kiss. I should?ve known then.
A drunk driver. Years of hesitation and one unforgettable month destroyed by one stupid person.
If I hadn?t been so bull-headed, denying the love she willingly gave to me, the heart she wore on her sleeve? our life together would?ve been longer.
But I know she would?ve told me it was still worth it.
The Last Day (Answer to Drabble Challenge)
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The Last Day (Answer to Drabble Challenge)
Last edited by Nausica? on Thu Jul 17, 2003 12:48 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Aww... That was really good! Tons of emotion squashed into 100 words!!
Great job!!
Great job!!
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Wow, nice use of only 100 words...did Relena or Heero have their last day?? I'm still kinda lost. 
Peace out!
Peace out!
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Kanya Barton wrote:did Relena or Heero have their last day?? I'm still kinda lost.
I should be the one blushing...The run-down of the story is, Heero's reflecting about how he should have known that that day was his and Relena's last day together. She dies in a car accident with a drunk driver. He's alone now, the poor guy...
Anyone want to cheer him up?
* hundreds of hands flash in the air *
Hmmm...
Anyone want to lend me a hundred bucks?
* crickets *
* shrugs * Worth a try...
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wow!
that hundred word part really tests ur discipline
but u fit it all in quite nicely!!!!
I forgot 100 words was that short.
great drabble
that hundred word part really tests ur discipline
but u fit it all in quite nicely!!!!
I forgot 100 words was that short.
great drabble
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wahhh!!!
oh, the angst bug hit again. i am sooo very envious. i can't believe you had such difficulty because those 100 words are just flawless. and they're exactly 100 words! man, mine was 116! lol. great job Naus! emotional and provocative.
oh, the angst bug hit again. i am sooo very envious. i can't believe you had such difficulty because those 100 words are just flawless. and they're exactly 100 words! man, mine was 116! lol. great job Naus! emotional and provocative.
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wow, i am amazed.... 
litia: *waves hand* damn, we've lost her again.hey, shes not even blinking
wow..all that emotion in 100 words......
Litia: Shadow, snap out of it, your scaring the crap out of me
its so sad...she dies of a car accident and its his reflections of her.....
Litia: Damn it Shadow, i'm leaving now *slams door*
NAUS!! that was a really REALLY sad little fic...in 100 words you've caught my attention!!!!!!
WRITE.MORE.NOW.....please
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litia: *waves hand* damn, we've lost her again.hey, shes not even blinking
wow..all that emotion in 100 words......
Litia: Shadow, snap out of it, your scaring the crap out of me
its so sad...she dies of a car accident and its his reflections of her.....
Litia: Damn it Shadow, i'm leaving now *slams door*
NAUS!! that was a really REALLY sad little fic...in 100 words you've caught my attention!!!!!!
WRITE.MORE.NOW.....please
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