The fact that you didn't have Relena say "I love you" to Duo, made the whole story more realistic and really, much better, IMO.
Keep it up - especially your current story with Relana oogling the pilots - gold, baby. That's gold!
Endlessly [ 2xR songfic, PG-13 for language ]
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Kainen
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Goosh, Gosh, Golly! That was really gripping stuff! I loved it. It was really well written and well described. The 1st person Duo perspective was refreshing - you do it so well and I can sympathize for Duo.
The fact that you didn't have Relena say "I love you" to Duo, made the whole story more realistic and really, much better, IMO.
Keep it up - especially your current story with Relana oogling the pilots - gold, baby. That's gold!
The fact that you didn't have Relena say "I love you" to Duo, made the whole story more realistic and really, much better, IMO.
Keep it up - especially your current story with Relana oogling the pilots - gold, baby. That's gold!
Why drink one cup of coffee with Heero, when you can drink two cups of coffee with Trowa and Heero???
I wanna be goth, but I don''t know how.
I wanna be goth, but I don''t know how.
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oh...isnt that ever so sweet of duo...i always imagined him falling somehow for relena...they would look cute together... 
but anyways...that was very mean of herro...very unlike him at all actually...but this is a fic and authors can do exactly what they want with the characters...hell they can even turn relena from a savvy princess to a freakin whore...right??? i hope there's a side of the story from heero...see how he'd do with the outcome of his foolishness. :x :x MAKE HIM CRY!!!! SUFFER!!! DIE!!! i think that was too much...(only kidding on the last part...ayt?) 
but anyways...that was very mean of herro...very unlike him at all actually...but this is a fic and authors can do exactly what they want with the characters...hell they can even turn relena from a savvy princess to a freakin whore...right??? i hope there's a side of the story from heero...see how he'd do with the outcome of his foolishness. :x :x MAKE HIM CRY!!!! SUFFER!!! DIE!!! i think that was too much...(only kidding on the last part...ayt?) 
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Aw, thank you very muchFate Lowe wrote:Loved it! I don't mind the Heero bashing one bit. In this fic it was needed. Besides, even though I love Heero, sometimes he needs to be brought back to Earth. If he didn't get bashed on every once in a while, his ego would take over the world.
I almost forgot about having posted my work here, but it's nice to be reminded and to see that the gw community in general is still flourishing.
I still feel a bit guilty for painting Heero in such a light, and I might even rewrite some scenes in here, but for now, I'll leave it as is. Especially since you enjoyed it ♥
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