alright, here are 2 poems I just wrote. I wrote them in different styles. let me know what you think ^_-
Calendar
Vertical and Horizontal
Lines, form its ways
waltzing into squares
confining days
Unmistakably merciless
Time, lover of the hourglass
shaking the sand
stealing every moment
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Streetlight
She breaks the bonds of darkness
illuminates an eerie path
Condemned by her freezing kiss
Is the sinner that rapes the silence
Calendar and streetlight
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