Whispers [general; drabble; rating: K]

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Whispers [general; drabble; rating: K]

Post by wicked »

<b>Disclaimer:</b> It definitely applies.

<b>AN:</b> 100 word drabble written for Mellie on July 13, 2006 in response to a meme on my El Jay. Her prompt was Trowa & whispers. Being the huge Trowa fan that I am, I couldn?t pass this up. Takes place pre-series (a first for me). It makes me want to write more about him pre-series. A part of me wants to expand this into a slightly longer one-shot/drabble. But I know I never will.

<center><b>Whispers</b>
by Wicked Child</center>

You kneel there, hoping they don?t hear you. Unconsciously you crouch further into a fetal position. Maybe they won?t see you?

You don?t know if you believe in God but that won?t stop you from praying in earnest. The hushed words come out in a furious torrent.

?Dear God don?t let them see me. Don?t let them find me. I?ll be a good boy I swear.?

You didn?t mean to stumble into their hideout. But it was raining and cold and you were so very tired.

?Hey kid, didn?t anyone tell you that God can?t hear you if you whisper??

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Post by Adaon »

*blink*

Wicked, posted fanfiction?

*blink*

That deffinitly deserves a *glomp* ! :D

Good job!
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Post by wicked »

Ha ha Gene! Yes I post fan fic from time to time. It's usually old by then but that's not the point. :-P

But YAYS! I gets glomps! I can never, ever have too many of those. XD

Thanks for taking a gander at this little ditty. It is most appreciated.

*glomps back because he is just Gene and worth it*

~Wicked

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Post by Terra »

I must say...this is quite good for a drabble. Oftentimes, we forget how much we can say with so little.

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Post by wicked »

Thank you. It took a bit of editing to get it down to a cohesive 100 words but thankfully I prevailed. I admit to being too long winded or wordy when I least want to be.

I'd love to expand upon the idea that spawned this drabble but I think I forgot which makes me a bad, bad Trowa fan.

Thank you for reading! XD

~Wicked

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Post by Aeris_Eithne »

It's amazing how much you say in just 100 words. I would love for you to expand this, though; there just aren't enough good Trowa stories out there. Everyone could use more Trowa. :love:
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http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1051001/

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Post by wicked »

Thank you. ^_^ I would love to expand upon this but I fear I may ruin it in some form or another. That and I fear I lost my original intention regarding this piece. Which is upsetting because I've never really written anything that surrounds Trowa yet he's my favorite Gundam pilot of all time.

Such a bad fan am I. ~_^

Again thanks for reading!

~Wicked

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