Operation Ultimatum: The Second Waltz [PG 13]

[PeaceWing]

Well this has certainly caught my interest! It sounds like it could be a good continuation of the series (and you seem to be keeping very close to the style of the series). I like the way you're focusing on some of the unresloved issues and unanswered questions left at the end of the series (e.g. the development on the Terraformation project, and the idea of whether peace can actually be maintained between the ESUN and the colonies). Anyway, I'm looking really forward to reading your first chapter!

P.S. It's coup d??tat, not coupe de tat - I just noticed you made that little error (sorry if I sound a little fussy).

[11krage]

Not dull, not dull at all, i like. I love the exchange between heero and relena, and i love how you stopped it on that last line duo said. That was the perfect place, this fic somehow seems really real. The themes carry on from the series and the movie so well. I can almost see it on sceen, espically the card bit. Anyways, write more pppplllllllleeeeeeeeezzzzzzzz.

[PeaceWing]

I agree with 11krage! This fic really does seem real! I could imagine the whole chapter being animated. I loved this chapter and I enjoyed the way it continues directly from Preventer 5. The scene with Heero and Relena was really sweet. (I thought the reference to episode 49 fitted in very well!). I can't wait unil the next chapter (and I really want to know if there is a link between Ronald Taylor and the terrorist group, Epyon del Telos).

[Heeros#1Girl]

I'm intrigued . . . But I mean come on, what an ass!

?You?re a lucky little bitch.? He said wickedly. ?But you?re still young?too young to understand real politics, I?m afraid.? With that, he pulled the trigger, shattering the screen and the visage of Miss Relena Darlian.

Man, is he gonna get it, lol

[lilac310]

whoa...this is super!!!...more!!!