Happiness in life

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angel222
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Happiness in life

Post by angel222 »

Happiness in life

Happiness in life

To wake up with closed eyes
Is a true bliss
If I don?t have to see the sadness
Around me
Then there is no reason to be sad

Blindly I want to dance
in the sun
With the warm feeling
on my skin
If I can?t see the pain then why
would I want to cry ?

Exactly, there is nothing to worry about
So please just smile with me
There is strength in blindly just running

If I could go on blindly and pure
I?d dance in this dream
I?d never have to cry over anything
Just smile
The happiness in life

To wake up not hearing
It?s a true bliss
If I don?t have to hear about sadness
Around me
Then there is no reason to cry

Deafly I want to sing
in the sun
With the warm feeling
on my skin
If I can?t hear the cries then why
Would I be sad?

Exactly, there is nothing to worry about
So please just smile with me
There is strength in deafly just running

If I could go on deafly and pure
I?d sing in this dream
I?d never have to cry over anything
Just smile
The happiness in life


(NOTE : ofcourse it's not about literally being blind and deaf, but about someone who wants to close it's eyes to sadness and doesn't want to hear about it in order to live on. the song 'Joy to my life' inspired me)
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Post by takisha16 »

Too bad it would be too hard to ignore the sadness in the world today.
I loved the naiveness of the poem. It would be great to remove yourself from the
never ending chaos in the world.
The truth is that, in today's world, it's not all about rainbows, sunshine and butterflies.
Reality always comes back to harshly slap you in the face. But, it's this kind of hope
that keeps us alive!
I especially loved this part:
If I could go on deafly and pure
I?d sing in this dream
I?d never have to cry over anything
Just smile
The happiness in life
It kinda brings the poem to a melancholic ending. I guess its hard if not possible to
remain pure and hold such a optimistic view that would rival even Starfire herself! (Teen Titans)
Nice one, we should smile more often! :love:

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Post by angel222 »

Thnx for reviewing. I just felt like writing like someone who wants to live ignorant of the world's situation and therefore remain happy and innocent.
we should smile more often!
so true!
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Post by Mellie »

It's so sweet. Sad and touching. It's moving in the hopes and the wanting to be ignorant and never feel the pain. I loved the softness of it, and a few of the lines sung musically to me. Beautiful job, luff!

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