please comment

[*romaticallysurrendered*]

okay umm this is just a song but it might go in a fic so please comment and man i totally fucked up how my song was written when i was goin to post it before so here it really is and the title:

OF MINE

i am tired of your lies
in the darkness your cries
are heard by my ears, and i
dont want to wipe away your tears

darling

* run from the light
outa my sight
dont want u no more
dont want to see u no more
....of mine....of mine*


i am... oh
i am increased by the looks
and stories told throughout all the books
of mine

just to hold you dear
is my biggest fear
of all of mine
yes all of mine...

darling

*chorus*

julst hold up and wait for a minute (X2)

theres somthin i have to tell you to begin it (X2)

*chorus*(prolong last 'of mine')


so please people i want your comments!!

[darky]

I did like your song and it would be an interesting fic, to see Kagome surrendering. however, I do love Inuyasha- Kagome being a couple, and I don?t like sad endings, so maybe you could write about her giving him an ultimatum or something, complicating things more than they are already. and then you could put a HAPPY ending, please????

I hope you do write the fic. It sounds good.

[*romaticallysurrendered*]

i have my story in writing but im not sure about the song...i think its gonna go at the middle or the beginning but im working on the story now and if i finish it in time it should be posted before december i dont know how long its gonna be though... so far i have 10 pages on paper but transfered to the computer mite be different.. so yea...10 pages isnt alot i think... but wat do i kno lol