look at the song I wrote!! (I think it's good)

[twistedrealityoflove]

I think it's good but you'll have to give me a reveiw to tell me what you think
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Unwritten faith to love
(Verse)
I am somewhere
Wishing I were somewhere else
But somewhere else
Is no where to be found
I?m looking for nothing
But nothing is something
And something
Is no where to be found
And what do I leave behind
How do I speak my mind
In the most complicated way
As I?m trying to say it out loud
(Chorus)
My patience is stirring
My thoughts are blurring about you
I?m falling apart
Don?t know where to start with you
I want to let you go
But my love is growing so deep inside
As I speak my mind
I try to find
(Verse)
Lost in the day
Confusion displays
That I?m lost in a vast
World of words
Save my soul
It?s taken a toll
From the worst
Years of my life
And what do I need to leave behind
Why do I have to speak my mind
In the most complicated way
As I try to say it out loud
(Chorus)
My patience is stirring
My thoughts are blurring without you
I?m falling apart
Don?t know where to start I need you
Don?t want to let you go
Because my love is growing so deep inside
As I speak my mind
I soon will find
(Bridge)
That it?s not so complicated
My thoughts have finally faded
Now that I have you
By my side
Somewhere else is found
I?m somewhere else bound
My confusion is gone
Now I?m so fond
Of you

[miz_lou]

Wow, that's purty good twistedrealityoflove!

[twistedrealityoflove]

thanks I try

[Aeris_Eithne]

Good job! I'm especially impressed that you're only 14! Way-to-freakin-go!

[twistedrealityoflove]

thanks I aslo have a whole bunch of poetry posted on poetry.com that I might move on here. If your that impressed I start writing at the age of nine and won a poetry award at 11 on janurary 4 2004 the same day my idol died from cancer. I think THATS cool because when I first got the envolope I got a really weird feeling and I knew she had died the moment I had it in my hands.

(I don't care if ya'll think I'm a freak because I am)