For all the poets out there, you've found a home to host your poetic GW-related dreams! Post away! If you want to associate names to them, it'll be a little easier to understand where you're coming from about your writing. I'll start off:
From Relena To Heero:
If I should ever lose you, dear,
Is what I've always grown to fear.
You being a warrior with little self control,
but as you fight, remember, my brave soul:
You have someone to live for,
please remember it is you I adore.
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I'm sad this thread hasn't taken off yet... Let's give it a kick start! I love this idea, though I wonder if the silly shorts section is appropriate.
We don't have to post silly poems, do we? Well, here's a serious one, Relena to Heero:
w a i t i n g
for a change
why does it have to
be this way?
never knowing
when you?re hot or cold
this endless
stream of days
is grating on my nerves
and your lack of faith
just makes it worse
just what it is,
I?ll never know
you hide and lie
don?t tell me so
if it?s over
I won?t know
your little lies
don?t tell me so?
?so I?m waiting
oh?
to understand it all
?. still w a i t i n g
for the ice to thaw
but with you I?ll
never know
you icy
enigmatic soul

w a i t i n g
for a change
why does it have to
be this way?
never knowing
when you?re hot or cold
this endless
stream of days
is grating on my nerves
and your lack of faith
just makes it worse
just what it is,
I?ll never know
you hide and lie
don?t tell me so
if it?s over
I won?t know
your little lies
don?t tell me so?
?so I?m waiting
oh?
to understand it all
?. still w a i t i n g
for the ice to thaw
but with you I?ll
never know
you icy
enigmatic soul
Once writing has become your major vice and greatest pleasure, only death can stop it. - Ernest Hemingway
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Calling fellow poets! I know there are more of you out there... who write Gundam Wing poems, to boot.
I bet some of you could even make something up on the spot. So come on, get posting! I happen to have quite a few GW-inspired poems and songs... In fact, I'm thinking about composing Gundam Wing: The Musical.
Don't laugh! There is a Star Wars one that played in Boston titled "Space Opera," so a Gundam Wing one could happen... especially with someone as tenacious as myself at the helm of the project.
So, here is the first poem I wrote from a GW character's perspective. ?Inside a Girl?s Heart? is the name of Relena?s theme, composed by Kou Ootani, and this theme appears in several incarnations throughout the Operation 1 OST. You can actually sing the words of this poem, if you are so inclined, to the tune of ?Soft Hair, Clear Eyes,? which is the most ?sing-able? manifestation of the theme. Keep in mind that the song is only two minutes long; thus, if you want to sing along with my lyrics, you?ll have to repeat the song all the way through. Well, happy singing!
Inside a Girl?s Heart
When you see my heart
If you look inside
There are fears that I just can?t hide
You can see all of me
When you look into my eyes
Oh, though I try so hard to keep it in
I can?t fight this restless feeling
It makes me want to scream and shout
How I long to let it all out
But I have to pretend
To stay in control
Though your gaze penetrates
My very soul
When you look in my heart
You will find
I am keeping you in mind
I can see your heart
When I look inside
There is so much that you try to hide
But every time, through and through
I?m falling more in love with you
Oh, though you try so hard to run away
I will find what it takes to make you stay
Though I can?t force you to be with me
I can only hope that you will see
When you look in my eyes
I lose control
?Cause your gaze penetrates
My very soul
When I feel your heart
Beating in time
I am keeping you in mine
Here in my heart?



So, here is the first poem I wrote from a GW character's perspective. ?Inside a Girl?s Heart? is the name of Relena?s theme, composed by Kou Ootani, and this theme appears in several incarnations throughout the Operation 1 OST. You can actually sing the words of this poem, if you are so inclined, to the tune of ?Soft Hair, Clear Eyes,? which is the most ?sing-able? manifestation of the theme. Keep in mind that the song is only two minutes long; thus, if you want to sing along with my lyrics, you?ll have to repeat the song all the way through. Well, happy singing!

Inside a Girl?s Heart
When you see my heart
If you look inside
There are fears that I just can?t hide
You can see all of me
When you look into my eyes
Oh, though I try so hard to keep it in
I can?t fight this restless feeling
It makes me want to scream and shout
How I long to let it all out
But I have to pretend
To stay in control
Though your gaze penetrates
My very soul
When you look in my heart
You will find
I am keeping you in mind
I can see your heart
When I look inside
There is so much that you try to hide
But every time, through and through
I?m falling more in love with you
Oh, though you try so hard to run away
I will find what it takes to make you stay
Though I can?t force you to be with me
I can only hope that you will see
When you look in my eyes
I lose control
?Cause your gaze penetrates
My very soul
When I feel your heart
Beating in time
I am keeping you in mine
Here in my heart?
Once writing has become your major vice and greatest pleasure, only death can stop it. - Ernest Hemingway
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Howdy, ya'all!
I just threw this together tonight----I really like the idea of this thread!
It's inspired from a google video that was posted on this site
so....credits go to that, and to 11krage I believe for posting it!
from Relena to [mostly] Heero; mood: sober/angsty
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The Absolute
____
You are called Heero Yuy
You called my principle a bunch of hooey.
They call you zero one
They call me, ?she who won?
This current politic wheel
Seems, quite so, just another smug ideal
A platform of absolute peace
And, well, did not we all it release?
I assure you, it?s not out of the blue
What I did I did for you
Go ahead. Breathe anew.
But heed the key word prevalent on this earth
A word not meant at all for mirth.
Absolute.
Ain?t that the truth.
Yet yesterday you laughed at me, like hee hee hee
Today I found out why
Oh, How I?m inclined to cry.
In absolutes, there is no room to disagree
This peace I wish for all to know
In which I wish for all to grow
Is intolerant of any other supplement;
What happens when the government
Is threatened by forces that are - n't?
The base mortal right
To defend oneself from strife
Is exactly the excuse
A non-violent government will abuse
What I did I did for you.
But you will not breathe anew
My mistake to think I gave you a break
For you alone will that mission take
You are the Guardian of this age?s absolute
The fruition of a killer
The cultivator of killer fruit
I did not set you free
Instead I brought you to your knees
You will never know this peace
You are its bane, not its cheese
I did have the power to change the people?s mind
And thus I placed you in a bind
You don?t seem to begrudge me, though
For fighting it appears is all you know
I was a fool
This world is very cruel
You will do murder
For this peace to further
In my sorrow I drown
I?m disaffected; give me back my crown
I failed my own mission
To perfect a vision
The people won?t mind; they don?t even know
Peck out their eyes just like a crow
So long as they have their prosperity
Peace can be twisted into any kind of parody
But you aren?t twisted
You knew all along
Your hands you just fisted
Till the ring of the gong
When that sucker chimes you get suited up
Cuz it?s in your pre-nup
You?re married to the mission
And the absolute vision
Again you laugh at me
But I won?t laugh back
Tis a catastrophe
The Guardianl attacks
What I did I did for you
But you won?t breathe anew
Did not know it would be the ruin of more than a few
Not just of you
Aye, today I am blue
~AA
I just threw this together tonight----I really like the idea of this thread!
It's inspired from a google video that was posted on this site
so....credits go to that, and to 11krage I believe for posting it!
from Relena to [mostly] Heero; mood: sober/angsty
____
The Absolute
____
You are called Heero Yuy
You called my principle a bunch of hooey.
They call you zero one
They call me, ?she who won?
This current politic wheel
Seems, quite so, just another smug ideal
A platform of absolute peace
And, well, did not we all it release?
I assure you, it?s not out of the blue
What I did I did for you
Go ahead. Breathe anew.
But heed the key word prevalent on this earth
A word not meant at all for mirth.
Absolute.
Ain?t that the truth.
Yet yesterday you laughed at me, like hee hee hee
Today I found out why
Oh, How I?m inclined to cry.
In absolutes, there is no room to disagree
This peace I wish for all to know
In which I wish for all to grow
Is intolerant of any other supplement;
What happens when the government
Is threatened by forces that are - n't?
The base mortal right
To defend oneself from strife
Is exactly the excuse
A non-violent government will abuse
What I did I did for you.
But you will not breathe anew
My mistake to think I gave you a break
For you alone will that mission take
You are the Guardian of this age?s absolute
The fruition of a killer
The cultivator of killer fruit
I did not set you free
Instead I brought you to your knees
You will never know this peace
You are its bane, not its cheese
I did have the power to change the people?s mind
And thus I placed you in a bind
You don?t seem to begrudge me, though
For fighting it appears is all you know
I was a fool
This world is very cruel
You will do murder
For this peace to further
In my sorrow I drown
I?m disaffected; give me back my crown
I failed my own mission
To perfect a vision
The people won?t mind; they don?t even know
Peck out their eyes just like a crow
So long as they have their prosperity
Peace can be twisted into any kind of parody
But you aren?t twisted
You knew all along
Your hands you just fisted
Till the ring of the gong
When that sucker chimes you get suited up
Cuz it?s in your pre-nup
You?re married to the mission
And the absolute vision
Again you laugh at me
But I won?t laugh back
Tis a catastrophe
The Guardianl attacks
What I did I did for you
But you won?t breathe anew
Did not know it would be the ruin of more than a few
Not just of you
Aye, today I am blue
~AA
The Angry Angel
Queen Piloteer of the Commis' Pride in Pink, the
Sex on Wheels

Famous Last Words:
"You Dirty Old Man!" and "Go Fight Win!" and "That's Right Bubbuh, I'm Singin'!"
Queen Piloteer of the Commis' Pride in Pink, the
Sex on Wheels

Famous Last Words:
"You Dirty Old Man!" and "Go Fight Win!" and "That's Right Bubbuh, I'm Singin'!"