The Angel and The Devil

[SHADOW]

"Were am I?" Relena asked as she woke up in a weired place dress in a wedding gown "Your home...with me" said a strange yet very fimilier voice "Derak?" Relena said in fright "I heared you and Heero are now dating...say it's not so...the angel on the Sank Kingdom and the devil." Derak said rather sadisticly. The same man who lost a fencing match to Heero almost two years ago (Gundam Wing episode 2) was decked out in a formor Alliance military uniform but unlike the standard uniform they wore, the one Derak had on was black.


Heero sat at the table looking at a small 14k gold ring with a perfect dimond on it "What are we going to do" asked Duo as he was puting 5.56x45mm rounds in to the 30 round mags "We won't do shit...It's my fight, my war, my past I must contend with" said Heero as he put on a black tacitcal vetst insted of the Omega granader/rifle vest he usualy uses, all his gear was black BDU's, boots,vest,ammo pouches ect. to top things off over the vest was a twin leather sholder holster with two Desert Eagles and his M-4 carbine minus the granade launcher all under a full lenth black trench coat. "Heero...It's scuicide to attack the facility...you don't even have the right intel for it" said Quatra "I know but...I'll be damned if that bastard has his way with her." replied Heero "Heero...We've been through so much fighting, so many battles that were like family, BROTHERS...we're sapose to lay are lives down for one another as such" said Duo tring to talk his best friend out of a date with death "Don't talk to me about family...I lost mine to Gotto and my past with it, I baried it when I became a Gundam pilot along with my soul...so don't preach to me about shit like that" said Heero as he walked out of the baracks armed with his weapons and an empty duffel

"Akira...your looking good" said Derak as him and Gotto huged like old friends "Like my new bride?" asked Derak "You know he'll come and her brother may not be that far behind" replied Gotto "Yeah...but I'll take care of themwhen they come" said Derak Relena saw who Gotto was from an old picture that Heero showed her a wile ago and knew what may happen as she thought to her self "Heero...please come"

Heero was in the armory loading ammo by the box in to the duffel as Zechs walked in and started to load up on ammo aswell "Stay out of my way Zechs" said Heero as he holstered his HK mark23 that was straped to his leg "Relena's my sister so don't tell me not to worry" said Zechs "Fine but the ass hole that thinks he can have fun with her...he's mine" said Heero Duo, Trowa, Quatra and Wu Fai all walked in and begain to load up on ammo "What the Fuck" asked Heero "Duo said were family...so we though we'd get in on this fight" said Trowa as his loaded his M-60E3 machine gun "You need all the help you can...One guy on his own is as good as dead but six...we have a chance" said Wu Fai "We'll stand by you even if we die...promise" said Quatra as he pulled back the bolt on his Galil. Just then "Gentalmen...Your not just going to head in to the heart of Martion controled teratory on a half assed rescue with out propper weapons...are you?" asked Col.Une "Follow me" she said the six of them did as she more or less ordered and followed her to an under ground hanger were the lights suddenly came on and to the astonishment of the six commandows were Zero, Deathsythe, Heavy Arms, Sandrock, Altron and even Epyon "You'll need these...and I'm personaly athorizing this mission" said Une as she walked off


"Cornel...were under attack! A large heat source was detected and we lost three Serpents." said a Martion solgier "It's them...Come Relena let us tie the knot as they say" said Derak as he grabed her. another solgier said to Derak " Gundams 02, 03, 04, 05 and even the fucking Epyon are attacking" "Fuck...send out all Serpents and crush them" said Derak all six Gundams fought there way through the hords of Serpent mobile suits and Heero was the only one to get close to the gate for now and said "I'm heading in" as he jumped off Zero and ran in Carbine at the ready. Heero moved in and almost instantly came into contact with the enemy as he ran tword them shooting getting dead on head shot he came to a chapel and heared the preist "Do you Derak Dormay take this woman to be your wife?" just then Heero kicks in the door and said" Sorry but it's over" "Heero!" said Relena who was relived to see him. The priest raised a pistol and said "Blasfemer...This is a holy ceramoney" but Heero shot him in the head with his Carbine and said "Theres nothing holy about this" his weapond went to Deraks direction with the words "Let her go and I'll let you live" "Sorry Preventer Raven...you'll have to kill me first" replied Derak Heero put his M-4 to his shoulder and said "Gladly MOTHER FUCKER"

[lilac310]

Seems interesting but don't forget to put spaces in between your narration and some of the dialogues 'cz right now it's kinda hard on the eyes with the huge blocks of texts following each other consecutively....proper spacing would be nice...

Other than that, keep writing...

...say it's not so...the angel on the Sank Kingdom and the devil

I like this line...

Cheers!

[takisha16]

Nice, same advice, but woah...Heero shot the preacher?!
And wait a second, the preacher had a GUN?!
jajaja. loved it!!!!

[WingZero2118]

great story man. i love it! keep it up.