Shots Fired - Part I - Chapter 4
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Shots Fired - Part I - Chapter 4
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HiFreak
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Viscotti has a friend! 
Yay!
Heero's and Relenas scene is to die for!
Yay!Heero's and Relenas scene is to die for!
\"A common mistake that people make when trying to design something completely foolproof was to understimate the ingenuity of complete fools.\" -- Douglas Adams Mostly Harmless Book 5 of The Hitchhiker''''s Guide to the Galaxy
" A God that men can percieve isn't really a God, is it?"
" A God that men can percieve isn't really a God, is it?"
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0mikr0n
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Hm... HiFreak, you're very perceptive. Nice guess... maybe, maybe not? The next couple chapters will tell. Thanks for being a dedicated reader, at any rate. You and Kainen seem to be the only two reading.
At any rate, I actually have a planned ending, but that's for me to know and you all to find out when the time comes. For right now, though, I got a lot of writing ahead of me; I have the whole storyline in my head, but I'm not sure how to implement it. I'm actually planning on letting Viscotti "take five" and probably have him lose focus for a little while. I've noticed I'm giving him a little too much of a spotlight, and will probably let him off for a little bit. This might not happen though, seeing as how hard it will be to find another part of the story to focus on; there's not much else to do so with, considering that he's the main player in the investigation. Tommorow I'll decide, I'm not too sure on that. Anyway, thanks for reading.
At any rate, I actually have a planned ending, but that's for me to know and you all to find out when the time comes. For right now, though, I got a lot of writing ahead of me; I have the whole storyline in my head, but I'm not sure how to implement it. I'm actually planning on letting Viscotti "take five" and probably have him lose focus for a little while. I've noticed I'm giving him a little too much of a spotlight, and will probably let him off for a little bit. This might not happen though, seeing as how hard it will be to find another part of the story to focus on; there's not much else to do so with, considering that he's the main player in the investigation. Tommorow I'll decide, I'm not too sure on that. Anyway, thanks for reading.
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Kevin Viscotti
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Kevin Viscotti
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Okay, thanks for not punishing me. See how nice 0mikr0n is?
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HiFreak
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HAHA 
Very funny. Poor Viscotti.
Very funny. Poor Viscotti.
\"A common mistake that people make when trying to design something completely foolproof was to understimate the ingenuity of complete fools.\" -- Douglas Adams Mostly Harmless Book 5 of The Hitchhiker''''s Guide to the Galaxy
" A God that men can percieve isn't really a God, is it?"
" A God that men can percieve isn't really a God, is it?"