Romeo and Juliet 1/?
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Romeo and Juliet 1/?
Romeo and Juliet
Chp.1
If he had a dime for every pretty girl that fell right on to him, he'd have one dime. He couldn't actually say that it was the greatest moment of his life since she was throwing up nearly on him but he'd still remember it forever.
He shook his head as the girl headed to the bathroom after about a minute of hurling on the floor. To think that it took her that long to figure out that it was the floor and not the toliet. Yet he followed her up the stairs anyways. He didn't know why. It was either that he felt sorry for her or that he thought that she was just plain stupid. She was a blonde after all.
She ran into the bathroom and almost slammed her head on the toliet ring as she shoved it down by the hole and let more come out. He watched from the doorway as her back went up and down from the pressure. Rolling his eyes, he walked in, closed the door and held on to her hair as she kept on going.
'Damn this girl can hurl..Hey I just rhymed!'
He started patting her back too until she finally stopped and flushed the toliet. She turned around and right then he knew that she wasn't going to have an easy sleep or a pleasent time in the morning. Her eyes kept closing and opening and her face looked like hell.
"Ugh, damn...I only had three drinks."
His right eyebrow went up. "Make that thriteen."
"Ah same smell, different nose hole."
She took one step and fell right into his arms. She pushed herself back up and headed out the door. He followed closely behind her just in case she fell again. She stopped for a brief second at the top of the staircase and stared at the bottom. To him it seemed like seven steps but to her it seemed like twenty to thirty and back to twenty. Everything was spinning and it wouldn't stop. She started swaying back and forth. Damn her head hurt like hell. Bringing her hand to her head to keep it from moving, the boy came and picked her up and walked down the stairs with her in his arms. She was just to pathetic to watch.
When he finally got the down the stairs, he put her down and she wrapped her arms around his neck. This took him by surprise especially when she gave him a kiss on the cheek.
"Your my hero Spiderman!" She said as her head started to swing again. He could feel his cheeks grow hot but it quickly passed.
The girl headed towards the front door and left. About five seconds later, she came back in and grabbed a jacket from the coat rack by the door and left.
The boy followed her out the door since it was his jacket that she took. He ran out into the street and looked both ways to find her already far gone.
For a drunk person, she sure could walk fast.
He ran and finally caught up to her but she didn't stop. He kept walking close but she acted as if he wasn't even there. Getting frustrated, he got in front of her and grabbed on to her shoulders. Right on cue, she slapped him in the face.
"What the hell?"
"Who the hell are you and why are you touching me. I'll scream if you don't leave now." She said this all pretty fast as if she might have forgotten what she was going to say if she went slow.
He thought and quietly answered, "Spiderman."
Her face lit up and she smiled. "Oh yeah. Now I remember." Right after that, she fell backwards and he caught her just in time.
It didn't take her long for her to open her eyes again. She started right into his dark blue eyes.
"Uh...my head...hurts like hell."
The boy nodded and sqwated in front of her. She looked confused at first but then got the message. She got on his back and he started walking.
She told him where her house was but he later found out that it was the neighborhood swimming pool. It took them two more tries until he was pretty sure that it was her house.
He set her down on the sidewalk and sat down next to her. She seemed a little more sober then she was from before but just a little.
She looked over to him to see that he was just staring up at the sky.
"What are you looking at?"
He looked at her and looked back up. "You see that bright light up there?"
She looked at him with a dumb expression on her face. "You mean that one right there? Or that one? Or how 'bout that one?"
He took her hand and used her pointer finger to point out the light.
"That's the L-1 colony. It's where I came from."
"Where you came from?"
He nodded. "My parents died a couple of months ago so my Uncle J took me here."
She may have been drunk but she was paying close attention. "I'm sorry."
He shook his head. "Don't be."
He got up and started to head home when she called out. "Hey, what's your name anyway?"
He turned around. "Heero.", and started walking again.
I don't own Gundam Wing. Only this story. ARE YOU HAPPY?!
Chp.1
If he had a dime for every pretty girl that fell right on to him, he'd have one dime. He couldn't actually say that it was the greatest moment of his life since she was throwing up nearly on him but he'd still remember it forever.
He shook his head as the girl headed to the bathroom after about a minute of hurling on the floor. To think that it took her that long to figure out that it was the floor and not the toliet. Yet he followed her up the stairs anyways. He didn't know why. It was either that he felt sorry for her or that he thought that she was just plain stupid. She was a blonde after all.
She ran into the bathroom and almost slammed her head on the toliet ring as she shoved it down by the hole and let more come out. He watched from the doorway as her back went up and down from the pressure. Rolling his eyes, he walked in, closed the door and held on to her hair as she kept on going.
'Damn this girl can hurl..Hey I just rhymed!'
He started patting her back too until she finally stopped and flushed the toliet. She turned around and right then he knew that she wasn't going to have an easy sleep or a pleasent time in the morning. Her eyes kept closing and opening and her face looked like hell.
"Ugh, damn...I only had three drinks."
His right eyebrow went up. "Make that thriteen."
"Ah same smell, different nose hole."
She took one step and fell right into his arms. She pushed herself back up and headed out the door. He followed closely behind her just in case she fell again. She stopped for a brief second at the top of the staircase and stared at the bottom. To him it seemed like seven steps but to her it seemed like twenty to thirty and back to twenty. Everything was spinning and it wouldn't stop. She started swaying back and forth. Damn her head hurt like hell. Bringing her hand to her head to keep it from moving, the boy came and picked her up and walked down the stairs with her in his arms. She was just to pathetic to watch.
When he finally got the down the stairs, he put her down and she wrapped her arms around his neck. This took him by surprise especially when she gave him a kiss on the cheek.
"Your my hero Spiderman!" She said as her head started to swing again. He could feel his cheeks grow hot but it quickly passed.
The girl headed towards the front door and left. About five seconds later, she came back in and grabbed a jacket from the coat rack by the door and left.
The boy followed her out the door since it was his jacket that she took. He ran out into the street and looked both ways to find her already far gone.
For a drunk person, she sure could walk fast.
He ran and finally caught up to her but she didn't stop. He kept walking close but she acted as if he wasn't even there. Getting frustrated, he got in front of her and grabbed on to her shoulders. Right on cue, she slapped him in the face.
"What the hell?"
"Who the hell are you and why are you touching me. I'll scream if you don't leave now." She said this all pretty fast as if she might have forgotten what she was going to say if she went slow.
He thought and quietly answered, "Spiderman."
Her face lit up and she smiled. "Oh yeah. Now I remember." Right after that, she fell backwards and he caught her just in time.
It didn't take her long for her to open her eyes again. She started right into his dark blue eyes.
"Uh...my head...hurts like hell."
The boy nodded and sqwated in front of her. She looked confused at first but then got the message. She got on his back and he started walking.
She told him where her house was but he later found out that it was the neighborhood swimming pool. It took them two more tries until he was pretty sure that it was her house.
He set her down on the sidewalk and sat down next to her. She seemed a little more sober then she was from before but just a little.
She looked over to him to see that he was just staring up at the sky.
"What are you looking at?"
He looked at her and looked back up. "You see that bright light up there?"
She looked at him with a dumb expression on her face. "You mean that one right there? Or that one? Or how 'bout that one?"
He took her hand and used her pointer finger to point out the light.
"That's the L-1 colony. It's where I came from."
"Where you came from?"
He nodded. "My parents died a couple of months ago so my Uncle J took me here."
She may have been drunk but she was paying close attention. "I'm sorry."
He shook his head. "Don't be."
He got up and started to head home when she called out. "Hey, what's your name anyway?"
He turned around. "Heero.", and started walking again.
I don't own Gundam Wing. Only this story. ARE YOU HAPPY?!
You shouldn't call anyone stupid cause no one is perfect. -me
I walked up the stairs and saw a man who wasn't there. I didn't see him again today, I wish, wish, he'd go away. -Identity
I walked up the stairs and saw a man who wasn't there. I didn't see him again today, I wish, wish, he'd go away. -Identity
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Cute story! I can't wait for the second chapter! Keep writing! Peace out! 

'Best, you've got to be the best! You've got to change the world and use this chance to be heard. Your time is now!' excerpt from "Butterflies and Hurricanes" by Muse (I love them! Matt Bellamy is teh shit!)
Here's a little known fact: Ninja tears can be used in place of olive oil to add flavor to many dishes, but they all KILL YOU! Think about that the next time that you're cooking with ninja tears...
Here's a little known fact: Ninja tears can be used in place of olive oil to add flavor to many dishes, but they all KILL YOU! Think about that the next time that you're cooking with ninja tears...
nice work....i think the part wherein Relena's seeing too many bright lights is very amusing...it really is a cute start....although, i must say that what you call a 'pointer finger' is actually called an 'index finger'.....just for the facts...
such a small thing, eh?..but over all, your fic is very promising indeed!!!!! So?
What are you waiting for?..get your ass working!!!!!
....YAY!!!!..-->I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!! 






"People who want to die, hurry up and die. You're wasting good air."
Professor G., Episode 24
Quatre: Trowa's dead!
Heero: Yeah, you killed him.
Episode 25
Professor G., Episode 24
Quatre: Trowa's dead!
Heero: Yeah, you killed him.
Episode 25
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Nice story, I thought it was very amusing reading a drunk Relena
Now, will you update soon? ^^

Now, will you update soon? ^^
"No eye could be clearer or brighter than the eye that had nothing to create, nothing to do but gaze" (The Deacy of the Angel --- Yukio Mishima)
"Where are there laws regulating an angel?" (The Decay of the Angel --- Yukio Mishima)
"Where are there laws regulating an angel?" (The Decay of the Angel --- Yukio Mishima)
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I loved your opening line. Made me smile and settle down for a nice read.
And then it stopped. How could you just stop? I need more... please?
Looking forward to the next installment. Hope it's soon...
- Naus
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Wow thanxs! Glad you liked it.Kanya Barton wrote:Cute story! I can't wait for the second chapter! Keep writing! Peace out!

lilac310 wrote:nice work....i think the part wherein Relena's seeing too many bright lights is very amusing...it really is a cute start....although, i must say that what you call a 'pointer finger' is actually called an 'index finger'.....just for the facts... such a small thing, eh?..but over all, your fic is very promising indeed!!!!! So? What are you waiting for?..get your ass working!!!!! ....YAY!!!!..-->I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!

Curious? Interesting? Sounds good to me! :razz:AngelOfDeath wrote:Interesting.... I'm very curious now so update soon.
Sissi wrote:Nice story, I thought it was very amusing reading a drunk Relena
Now, will you update soon? ^^
Really? I thought it sounded funny too! I mean amagine Relena....drunk.....AHAHAHAHAH.......
Nausicaa wrote:I loved your opening line. Made me smile and settle down for a nice read.
And then it stopped. How could you just stop? I need more... please?
Looking forward to the next installment. Hope it's soon...
- Naus
Sorry but I don't know how to put up the two dot thingys above your 'a'. Just to let you know.....it took me awhile to think of an opening line that would actually make someone sit down and read.....IT WORKED!!!!!!!
You shouldn't call anyone stupid cause no one is perfect. -me
I walked up the stairs and saw a man who wasn't there. I didn't see him again today, I wish, wish, he'd go away. -Identity
I walked up the stairs and saw a man who wasn't there. I didn't see him again today, I wish, wish, he'd go away. -Identity
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Cute! Er, well, sorta. Not the hurling part, but... well, cute! 
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Love,
Rose

Can't wait for the next chapter!
Love,
Rose
Love,
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I agree with Naus, the opening line was what really snagged me, and I really like this fic so far. Keep up the good work!!
(btw, my favorite part was:
-Cherry
(btw, my favorite part was:
That was great^_^!!)"Who the hell are you and why are you touching me. I'll scream if you don't leave now." She said this all pretty fast as if she might have forgotten what she was going to say if she went slow.
He thought and quietly answered, "Spiderman."
-Cherry
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