Amour 5/? (lemon)

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Post by The Angry Angel »

I say the same to you, Tobo Castit.

Before you go and bite someone else's tail or do the online *prod* thing, finish your DAMNED GOOD STORY!!!

Then you would be qualified to jump on other people.
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Post by Morrighan »

.....Be nice. Don't make me repeat this.
<i>?I always know you?re about to say something very sweet or very stupid when you use my full name??</i>

Why yes, I <i>am</i> a saucy wench. :-P

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Post by The Angry Angel »

I am being nice. Tobo Castit and I have an agreement. She knows where my heart lies. It lies in the dust at her feet. And it will continue to bleed until she follows through with our business venture.

Are you some sort of boss or bouncer for this site? At ease. It's not your contract on the table.
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Post by Morrighan »

Yes, I am one of the many moderators on this site. I was just concerned with the tone of your "voice."
<i>?I always know you?re about to say something very sweet or very stupid when you use my full name??</i>

Why yes, I <i>am</i> a saucy wench. :-P

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Post by The Angry Angel »

I felt the MOB coming on with your sentence "Don't make me repeat this" OOOOO!!:eek: eek. Uh oh.

Peace. I love everyone. I love you. And I love Tobo. Very much. Almost more than I love Andrea------------and Rose! I'll be sure to add more expression faces or **** thingies to convey my "voice."

Double A: Cheers.

Morrighan: Wuss.
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Post by momiji_k »

Another fabulous chapter full of detail. I really love how you "paint" with words. I just can't ever seem to get that same deep feeling any time I ever write anything. You have incredible talent.

Since you said in your notes you like interpreations here is mine:

I was a little puzzled at first by Heero's rough behavior. Then, in light of what had happened it made a lot of sense. She has been made to feel like she was controlling. What better way to tell he she is not by dominating her and controlling her.

I love his statement, "You are not controlling, you are strong".

That's what my husband always said about her because fans always bash her and say she is controlling. He always tells them they ought to look again. She is a strong person and a lot of people could learn something from her character. :)

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