Snog fic: Vanilla

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AngelOfDeath
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Post by AngelOfDeath »

So melancholy... but pretty. As always the characters seem vivid and new despite being the same Heero and Relena we know and love.

I'd love to see more, as in an expansion, so do think about it a little more. :)
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Post by shadowcat »

maybe you can build up this fic, like create a sequel. its a really super brginning but it did seem a bit rushed. but it was still a pleasure to read
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Post by Tremolo Violet »

Wow, that was beautiful Miss Rose.
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Post by Miroku »

that was well written yes?

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Post by elyra-chan »

Ohh... I love this fic. So wonderful. I love your writing, Rose. :D
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Post by Assassin_chiq »

Umm... I know this is probably going to sound like redundant and stupid question but... I was just wondering, if this is a songfic... umm what were the songs? Yeah... other than that I liked it alot... I've read most of your work so I would have to say not one of your best, it felt (as the first person said) a little rushed, and I was kinda confused, but I got the just of it and thought it to be sweet... in its own confusing mind-boggling kinda way! :oops: Keep up the great work! Till next time! :salute:
~One taste was just not enough?
It made me crawl back, desperate for more?
The cravings were uncontrollable?
In my hunger, I killed?
In my need, I slaughtered?
I was a puppet to my desire,

For the taste of chaos?~ Moi
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Post by blackrose »

It wasn't a "song" fic, it was a "SNOG" fic, as in Psyche's challenge "101 Ways to snog (kiss) en route to a colony". We had to write something in under 800 words. So, yes, it's rushed. I may take on a project of trying to write a full fic out of it. I got the seed of the idea listening to (I believe it's a song by Journey?) Midnight Train.

Thanks for reading!
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Post by Assassin_chiq »

:oops: hehe, yes I noticed that now... Sorry... I feel like a complete idiot... *sigh* Thanks for being so polite... Snog means kiss huh? lol that's definitely one I've never heard before... :wink: Thanks again! Till next time :salute:
~One taste was just not enough?
It made me crawl back, desperate for more?
The cravings were uncontrollable?
In my hunger, I killed?
In my need, I slaughtered?
I was a puppet to my desire,

For the taste of chaos?~ Moi
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