Desperation

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Desperation

Post by Cowboy_Bebop_Fanatic »

Desperation lies within, is that such a sin?
Desperatoin is that your last resort?
So many things have happened in states of desperation.
Desperation takes many shapes and causes many actions.
What can we say, when such actions cause attractions?
Sad but true, yet so much too few.
Nothing but riddles to a solemn few.

Desperation helps us live.
It gives us strength for us to live.
Necessity to win and live, powers the desperation within.
If only it did not harm us in times of need.
Sad but true, yet so much too few.
Nothing but riddles to a solemn few.

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Post by tornin1/2 »

that was really good, i liked the repetition and the slight rhymes, i can't rhyme unless i think a lot, so that must mean that your really good.
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